A post to fix this topic!

https://scratch.mit.edu/projects/567204234/
This is a project of mine
I really hope you all will like it
Its a human calculator project.
Please Enjoy.





Keep on SCRATCHING!

Knightbot63 wrote:

Inputs in Python are always strings. Print the input variable and you'll get something like this:

'35'

This isn't actually an integer the way Python sees it Python sees it as a String. You can force the userGuess variable to be an integer by using the int() function that's in Python. You can also do this with strings and many more.
Here is your fixed code:

import random
randomNumber = random.randint(1, 100)
print(randomNumber)
userGuess = int(input("Guess!"))
if randomNumber > userGuess:
    print("Your guess is too small!")

Oh, thank you!

MeIzAwezomeDede wrote:

PlaceError wrote:

MASSIVE HOT TAKE:
Cob Cannon Is Pretty Mid Ngl.

Objectively an S-tier plant, there's endless strategies without Cob Cannon but it makes the mode humanly possible

Yeah, I know but..
It’s really, REALLY impractical outside of survival. And also, cob cannon requires 700 sun if you were going to count the 2 kernel-pults, takes up 2 tiles, cannot be protected by pumpkin, making it very vulnerable, and takes a long time to recharge it’s cob. With all those reasons combined, I would say this is a D Tier plant. Most overrated plant in the game by far.

xavidoodleALT wrote:

So like a poker machine roll type thing?

pretty much, no. You only can roll 1 at a time and it all depends on ur luck and what you'll get.

It's pretty much like sol's rng in roblox

Hi ST!
Please feature this studio on Holi, it has a nice theme and all!! And Holi is celebrated worldwide!!
Link: https://scratch.mit.edu/studios/34822130/

ceebee wrote:

বাংলা, Español, Deutsch, عربى, Français, हिंदी, मराठी, 汉语, ଓଡ଼ିଆ, ਪੰਜਾਬੀ, Polski, Português, Русский, اُردُو, 漢語
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- Provides an interesting prompt that inspires Scratchers to be creative and make projects
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Please try not to post the same studio multiple times! It would be especially helpful if, when proposing a studio, you explained how the studio provides a unique, interesting, and specific prompt for Scratchers.

(This is a new topic created on July 12, 2023 because the old one got too big.)

https://scratch.mit.edu/studios/34856853/

SawyerDrawsThings wrote:

i'm definitely chill with giving feedback and such!! if you want, i can start searching for someone to work on a japanese translation? i'm in quite a few japanese studios ^^

yess good idea

So like a poker machine roll type thing?

dumorando wrote:

bun has a package manager for node thats really fast

Pretty sure Bun's package manager can work with Node, but it's designed for Bun.

MythosLore wrote:

Xzillox wrote:

hang on a second-
Why not just record yourself singing? Even if you're a bad singer, it probably won't be much worse or probably better than whatever the text-to-singing comes up with.

What if you don’t want to share your voice on Scratch, or what if your voice is a baritone and you want a soprano voice to sing your song?

https://scratch.mit.edu/discuss/11/

i'm definitely chill with giving feedback and such!! if you want, i can start searching for someone to work on a japanese translation? i'm in quite a few japanese studios ^^

hey guys! i think it's officially been about two hours since skye's claim was counted ( as she might be busy ) so i think it needs to be passed on to the next person <3
update, the person after her also isn't responding- ( for an hour ) skip again??

edit: i'm really really sorry ( i hate to be a killjoy- ) but whatever happened to this lmao?

Please only claim one or two posts ahead - if there are already two posts already claimed, you'll have to wait.<3

i think anyone after this comment should probably wait until a /lot/ of stories have been made to claim further haha <3

Ducky0112 wrote:

when green flag clicked
say [bomb does nothing]

I want to make a bomb that kills anything close to it.

ig you could make a “bomb sprite” and after a set amount of time (or if a condition is met), if the player is in the range (you could do this with hitboxes maybe? or you can compare the different x and y values) it'll detonate and do you what you want it to do

not the most helpful post but it should hopefully give you a simple understanding of how you can implement it.

ceebee wrote:

The Propose Projects to Be Featured studio is looking for curators for the next term, April 2, 2024 - June 3, 2024.

The Proposed Projects to Be Featured studio is one place the Scratch Team looks to find projects to feature on the homepage. All Scratchers can propose projects. The curators help by adding those projects to the studio.

If you become a curator, you will:

• Look at the studio comments for projects that Scratchers would like to add
  
• Check that the person proposing the project is…
  - A Scratcher
  - Not the person who made the project
  
• Check that the project…
  - Doesn’t obviously break the community guidelines (if it does, report it instead!)
  
• If all those things are true, add it!
  
• Respond to the comment to let them know you added it
  

We are looking for curators who are Scratchers, and who are friendly and helpful in the community. You can serve as many terms as you would like; if you have already been a curator and would like to continue helping, just ask again.

If you’re interested, respond to this thread!

Many thanks to the PPTBF Curators who helped the last two months!

I love scratch. I promise I will make sure that the person is a scratcher, not the project creator, report inappropriate/community guidelines forbidding projects, check the studio once a day for at least 30 possible featured projects and respond with a kind and friendly comment. I would be honoured
to be a curator of Propose Projects to be Featured!

I am sorry to say, but that's rejected!

The Official List of Rejected Suggestions wrote:

8.1 Changing usernames or changing display names
If a user could change their username (or even set a certain “nickname” or “display name”), this could be very confusing for the Scratch community, especially for those following that user. In addition, this would make moderation of the website more difficult because it would be harder for the Scratch Team to keep an eye on what a user may be doing. The Scratch Team has allowed username changes only on very rare occasions, such as if the username contains personal information or causes gender dysphoria. Generally, the Scratch Team does not change usernames on request (including for reasons such as “I do not like my current username anymore”).

However, because of the way that usernames are stored on the server, changing the cases of letters in your username (for example, changing @Za-Chary to @ZA-CHARY) is NOT rejected; you can discuss it on this topic.

so when I click the button, it will show roll a random item, they all have their own rarity: 1 in 2, 1 in 4, 1 in 100k, 1 in 1m, etc.

and I'm confused on how to script it, can someone help me?

List of entity ideas:

(note these may not be all, just a few ideas)

LAVA CUBE
Behavior: Hostile
Found In: ALL e.g. Volcano(especially), Plains, Forest, Desert, etc.
Stats:
HP-3 Hearts
Attack-1 Damage
Speed-Moderate
Range-Moderate
Spawn In-3-4
Facts:
-Minions of the Lava boss
-Lowest rank of enemy

GOAT
Behavior: Peaceful
Found In: Mountains
Stats:
HP-5 hearts
Attack-2 damage
Speed-Fast
Range-Short, has Charge
Spawns In-2-5
Facts:
-Goats will ram into you if provoked.
-You can milk them.

BOSS
Behavior: Hostile
Found In: Volcano
Stats:
HP-15 Hearts
Attack-7 Damage
Speed-Fast
Range-Long
Spawns In-1
Facts:
-The boss is the master of lava and the big bad guy
-You will get an achievement and a fire sword upon defeating it

Other ideas:
Horse-ridable
Sea turtle-peaceful
Bear-Neutral(attack if provoked), loves honey, lives in forests
Dog-Can collect things for you
Magma Cube-higher rank than lava cubes
Ghost-found in the Haunted Hills
Golems-strong beings that can help you fight
Hamster-can follow you around as pets
Tiger/leopard/lion/puma-big cats that attack if provoked

Inputs in Python are always strings. Print the input variable and you'll get something like this:
This isn't actually an integer the way Python sees it Python sees it as a String. You can force the userGuess variable to be an integer by using the int() function that's in Python. You can also do this with strings and many more.
Here is your fixed code:

critiquitaire with @PoppyWriter/Poppy <3

I rip off the cuff of my jeans to staunch the bleeding in my left leg.
He’s beside me, leaning against the dumpster in the alley we’re hiding in.

aaa i love this, i love the beginning and the way you describe the setting

The two of us are just outside of town, watching the vaguely-blue smoke rise from the center of the city.

just a personal choice, but i’m a little confused as to how blue can be vague? maybe that does make sense and my brain is fried rn ahah ^^’ but that’s a little thing i wanted to mention anyway <3

It smells like moss, and the earthy scent makes my head throb. I slide down against the dumpster.

the description omg <3

The rain from last night has made the metal cold and wet, and it seeps through my shirt to chill me further.

the wording sounds a bit strange here to me - maybe “it seeps through my shirt /and/ chills me further”? or something like that?

He and I have talked about those sirens.

i’m a little confused on who “he” is, and also maybe mention a bit about what the sirens are? i’m feeling a bit confused here.

I shake his shoulder in line with the rhythm of my shivering.

oooo

I pull my legs up to my chest and lean my forehead against my ratty jeans.
“Hey,” he says. “You gotta keep your eyes open.”
I look up.
He looks down at the ruined soles of his shoes and laughs to himself quietly.
“I don’t know why.”

ah i love the repetition it’s so cute and effective and i just love the effect it adds to it <3

i loved it poppy! you did such a good job with everything, especially with the dialogue and description <3 i just think you needed to clarify things a bit here and there, but it was great overall! i love your style hehe <3

Well as you can see, I released the single player version of Roblox 2 Pre-alpha game, a testing game and I want y'all to check it out and tell me what is wrong. I use this code so that both the characters can stand on the ground and jump in the single player version of the game.

define idk
switch costume to [ Normal v]
change y by (1)
repeat until <not <touching [ Tester Ground v] ?>>
change y by (1)

end
change y by (-1)

Ok I have some ideas!
- make the world record work
- and make a half blue half red half black backround, it will look great!

How do you make a loading bar?

GUYWHOLOVESCODE wrote:

ahalix wrote:

I'd still love to know if there's a way to undo this (make them parallel again) without using Crtl+Z.

Select the point and click on “Curved” again.

Okay, perfect! Thanks so much!

MinionPigFan21 wrote:

Hello, i have a question: How i can make a 2nd account on Scratch?

Do i need to open a new browser for this (i usually use Google Chrome, so i can use Microsoft Edge to make a 2nd account?)

Can i use the same Email from my main account during the 2nd one creation?

After creating my 2nd account, how i can follow myself???

Please help me!

Dear MinionPigFan21
You can create your 2nd account from Join Scratch. Click this link to create your 2nd account Your text to link here…
Thanks

✉ critique for niko
715 words

leaves rustled in the autumn air and crunched below ciaran’s boot. her lantern radiated a soft light, illuminating the beaten path. a squawk echoed through the woods as a crow flew through the thick branches landing stiffly on her shoulder.

i think that this paragraph is very well done <3 the setting is described in such a way where the reader can easily picture what you’re talking about. if you wanted to, you could elaborate on the “brightness” of the forest as there’s quite a wide range of it right now - it could be the middle of the night, early morning, dusk, dawn, you get the idea. to add a bit more of a mysterious element, you could also leave out that it was a crow or bird altogether, changing it to something like “a sudden squawk and the beating of wings echoed through the woods, and a shadow cut through the thick branches. “patience, kav,” ciaran muttered in a low whisper, addressing the crow now perching on her cloaked shoulder. “just a little farther.”

grammar - comma needed after ‘branches,’ could add confirmation in the first sentence that the second part is regarding the leaves, as it could be interpreted as the autumn air is crunching beneath her boot. comma needed after ‘landing’ in the third sentence.


“patience kav,” ciaran said in a low whisper, “just a little farther.”

really not much to say here, if you really wanted to, you could change “said” to a different adjective, but otherwise, great start!

grammar - comma needed after ‘patience.’ comma after ‘whisper’ should be a period.


the crisp, cold air of the night provided little comfort to ease her growing worry. the letter gave little information for ciaran to decipher and the writing was not like jadu’s familiar style. she found herself desperately hoping it was in fact jadu who sent her the message.

again, another well-written paragraph however, the ‘not like’ in the second paragraph feels a little awkward; i’d recommend you change it to something like ‘unlike.’

grammar - optional comma after decipher.


despite labeling herself the lone witch it had been months since she had been able to speak to her fellow witches in person. at least half of the coven had been killed in the past year and most of the rest were too deep undercover to be able to risk communication.

using the term witch twice in the first sentence feels a bit repetitive, so i’d say change it to something like sorceress or enchantress. i really like the way the plot builds in this paragraph, it really draws the reader in and raises the stakes.

grammar - comma needed after witch in the first sentence. optional comma after ‘and’ in the second.


a loud squawk brought ciaran back from her deep thoughts, “what is it kav?” she asked reaching for her staff. then she saw it.

since you’ve already used ‘squawk’ to describe the sound kav makes, it is, once again, a bit repetitive. a shriek would do the job just as well; perhaps you could use that in the first paragraph, as i suggested, to build suspense. ‘deep thoughts’ also seems a bit out of place, maybe replace it deep with profound or change the whole thing out altogether for introspection.

grammar - comma after ‘thoughts’ should be a period. in the quotation marks, there should be a comma after ‘it.’ comma needed after ‘asked.’


rhododendrons. blasted little flowers. the pink ones, common all across the country but the yellow ones, a symbol of the circle of the divine. witches gathered from across the globe hoping to reunite the land despite its catastrophic consequences. they had been after ciaran for years, trying to recruit her or simply get rid of her.

this section adds a lot of depth to the plot, but i do think it feels a little clunky. this is more of a grammar issue, but in the second sentence, i’d say to swap out the commas for either ‘were’ or add a hyphen instead. i believe that you’ve made them commas as maybe a way to add a little more to the story, but it is a bit awkward to read for your readers. as for the third sentence, ‘reunite the land’ definitely seems important but it doesn’t hold too much significance to the reader as there’s little to no explanation why. you might want to add a sentence before, like “after the death of blah blah blah, the kingdom had fallen into ruins. witches gathered from all across the globe…”

grammar - comma after country in the first sentence. comma after land in the third sentence, varies depending on what you mean as it is a little hard to understand.


“go, kav!” ciaran ordered, pulling out her staff as figures surrounded her, enclosing her in a circle. her eyes flew over their robes, examining the intricate designs which showed their power.
i don’t have anything to say about this paragraph, well done!


all green witches. powerful enemies in the midst of the forest but she still had the night to her advantage. the witches wore their flowers as crowns, high atop their heads, shining in the light.
love this section! i’d love to see a full-length guide about all the different kinds of witches.
grammar - comma after forest in the first sentence.


they would be resilient enemies.
really well-written ending to a fantastic story <3

overall, i really liked this piece as a whole - the mood was quite clearly established and you managed to do a good amount of world building in only 200 words. like i said, i’d love to see you add on to this story - it’s a really interesting concept and i’d be interested in reading more! you did a fantastic job on this piece, and although it does seem like i critiqued quite a bit, it actually took me quite a long time to think of any - even light - criticism since i liked this piece so much really well done, hope you keep writing!

critique for @flowerelf371 | piece critiqued: https://scratch.mit.edu/discuss/post/7860997/

Xzillox wrote:

hang on a second-
Why not just record yourself singing? Even if you're a bad singer, it probably won't be much worse or probably better than whatever the text-to-singing comes up with.

What if you don’t want to share your voice on Scratch, or what if your voice is a baritone and you want a soprano voice to sing your song?

Version 1.11 is now out with new Menu music and an increase to the damage upgrades. You can now spend up to 10 Skill Points on the Damage Upgrade to increase all damage up to 50. Since most weapons deal an average of 80 damage this is a significant increase to help you get to higher rounds for the Online Leaderboard. It even increases your melee damage. I will update the Notes and Credits section with the name of who ever is top of the Online Leaderboard.

• 1.09 - Added new menu music
  

• 1.10 - Fixed a visual bug with the damage upgrade and increased the total damage increase
  

• 1.11 - Buffed the Kar and Scoped Kar to perform with higher damage due to the slow fire rate (will monitor changes)
  

Depends, if a love and fav detector is used in a non harmful way, such as saying “Thanks for the love/fav!”, then it's fine, but if its using the love/fav detector to give items or a boost, then it would be going agains Terms of Use for manipulating statistics (Section 3.5, item 5).

if the detector only gives you like a thanks after you love/fav it, it should be alright
but if it gives you something like an extra life or a skin, yeah, it’s reportable

Depends what they use it for, if they use the detector to make a thanks pop-up message, it's allowed, but if they use it so you have to love/favorite to continue in the project or en extra item or something, then it's reportable.

WallydogChoppychop wrote:

hydrofungus wrote:

WallydogChoppychop wrote:

Support. I completely agree with everything you said here, It would also be nice if scratch could allow images starting with the name: https://scratch.com

you know that site’s taken right

I mean websites starting with s c r a t c h . c o m or h t t p s : / / u p l o a d s . s c r a t c h

Scratch.com subdomains can’t be nought, though.
And .scratch isn’t a TLD i believe

co0lcr34t10ns wrote:

Rooting for Team 0%! Hope they can get to Trimming the Herbs in time! Crazy how that's just it, and every level will have been beaten.

TTH was clear confirmed with tool assistance, and the one clear on it was hacked.
They already did it, and “The Last Dance” was the last level.

Regardless, I'll still give it a try before the servers go down.

spending so much time trying to let the STUPID filter accept my post…

critique - 602
with @Scrollreader023
( part one https://scratch.mit.edu/discuss/topic/748557/?page=1#post-7870814 )
Woah ok so right off the bat, Lucius is such a cool character! I did a bunch of research on alexithymia for this (I kind of went down a rabbit hole because I've discovered I might actually have it? oops), and it appears that there's two types, affective (difficulty experiencing feelings) and cognitive (difficulty identifying feelings). I'm assuming he has the former because of the line,

(i)t was hard for him to feel emotion

so I'll be talking about alexithymia in terms of this type, not cognitive.


One of the symptoms of alexithymia is an externally oriented thinking style (eot), meaning that the person with eot thinks mainly in terms of reactions to external stimuli - or, they're focused on external events, not internal. For the most part, Lucius shows this, but in a few sections, his thoughts turn internal -

Had it been the White Dragon or the Snow Dragon? He couldn't remember. It was only in the top twenty most powerful dragons ever. He had killed higher ranked.

This information is used to further develop his person as strong and, well, really really good at killing dragons, but it's presented in a way that's contrary to his alexithymia (although the extent to which eot is the main thinking style in alexithymic people differs, but since it's stated that it's hard for him to feel any emotions, I'm assuming that he has dominant eot to go along with the more severe alexithymia). In order to portray the symptoms that are characteristics of his condition and preserve this information, you may want to mix around where the information is said - instead of having as a side-thought sort of bit in his thoughts (which would work super well in someone without eot!!), maybe try putting it as more of a fact in the piece, like how you wrote,

He could never find a worthy opponent to fight, beating everyone who tried. Even his master, previously the 6th strongest swordsman in Aurumiyrn, couldn't match Lucius's raw talent.

This quote doesn't appear directly in his thoughts (although it could be interpreted as such), instead being more of a statement that the reader gets to know.

He looked down. It was hard for him to feel emotion, but a stab of pity went through him. Such a marvelous creature, felled by a mere human.

If he has only affective alexithymia and doesn't show signs of the cognitive type, then these lines are fine, but it's unlikely that someone with cognitive alexithymia would be able to identify an emotion (especially pity, which is a pretty complicated emotion) so quickly, and especially when it's a stab of emotion (quick flash of a feeling) and not something lasting longer. Again, if he doesn't have any cognitive alexithymia, then this is totally fine!


That's pretty much all I have, but I'll leave you with one extra thought - Lucius is not, at least in this example, particularly likeable. I like him as a character; he's very interesting to read, but I don't like his character itself (personality-wise, I mean). If he is the main character in your world, and he is meant to be likeable, then you might want to add him doing positive actions, rather than just killing and asking everyone to submit. However, as this is just a short excerpt from what seems to be a much longer story, so it may be that he is much more likeable in other situations. Overall, though, he seems to be a really nice character and you've done a lovely job in fleshing him out! He's a very creative sort of character (and I mean that in a good way!) Thanks for letting me critique!!

Weekly Three
Part One

Event One: The Body Is Discovered
One of the seven camp counselors at the small camp Sunny Days Camp is found mysteriously dead by one of the two main characters, hearing impaired Willow, less than three hours before the camp newspaper comes out, told to have many ghastly secrets printed on it from the camp counselors, spilled by the victim.
Event Two: Death of Sail
Sail, the main suspect, a camper with secrets of attempted murder and being blackmailed by the victim (Ben Jaynal) is found dead, poisoned after confessions to being part of the murder, but not the only one in the case. The motive to this straight forward to the characters and they are completely correct- Sail confesses before their life is taken to being part of the murder, and the murderer is worried Sail will reveal their identity.
Event Three: Realisation of Murder
Planning on accusing May, Ben’s ex, the seemingly criminal mastermind with Sail as the accomplis, because of the happening on the night they broke up, the secrets she spilt on the drink. The proof against May however is mainly that in the cabin simply with her and her friend August who is seemingly innocent, the manuscript was discovered by Willow and Autumn in the cabin under a bed. However, when Willow and her older sister and other main chatacter Autumn barge in on May, they see August burning the manuscript, and washing blood frantically off her clothes.
It finally clicks- August was the murderer!
Event Four: The Run
When August notices the two main characters, she goes into a fury, worried if found out she will be forced into jail (again!!!plot twist) and starts chasing after them with a knife used to commit Ben’s murder. While running for their lives, Autumn trips and faces the tourture of August, using the knife to cause pain (but not death) to Autumn. However, the security guards coming to check the security cameras run in, and cause August to wait out for her arrest, following with many years behind bars.
Part Two

authors note- this mystery revelations are more based on witnesses and confessions, so in the actual writing piece these clues may held less significance]
1. Red Herring- The Manuscript
When the manuscript for the gossip newspaper at camp comes out, the random written about August is ripped out. Suprisingly, there are two Augusts at camp, and the loud, mysterious August with a bottle almost always accompanying her, was suspected by the amateur detectives as the August in question, wrapped out by her sister and suspected murderer, May. However, in reality, it was the quiet, solemn cabin mate of May who was the August in question, as well as the murderer.
2. Clue and Red Herring - Footprints
In the mud around the murder scene, there are heeled prints printed lightly in the mud, with love hearts etched into the pattern. Assumed to be by Autumn a new pair of Sail’s hip hop indulged boots, Willow observes the night before the reality dawns on them that August has an almost identical pair, only turquoise. When Willow mentioned this, Autumn had shaken it away- after all, it wasn’t August they suspected, but they knew Sail had been involved (confession before death). However, as they realize as they hide from August- August is lighter and younger, and so it makes sense for the print to be lightly printed on.

3. Red Herring- Bl00d On Clothes
When Gale (camp nurse and innocent) is suspected, when she is ‘loosely and not confirmed’ interviewed, she comments on how when May came in to have her medicine, she had bl00d stained freshly all over her top the night Ben was discovered dead. However, as the crew dig deeper into the case, they realise she was hit in the face with a hockey ball and broke her nose, ending up in red stuff all down her front. This does not defer Autumn and Willow, who are solely focused on proving May is guilty, ignoring the facts pointing to August D.

4. Red Herring- Secret Relationships
Though the manuscript hinting at Augusts past in prison are ripped up, a few words are still left up the top- relationship appearing constantly. Seen as stunning evidence against May, as she and Ben (first victim) were in a relationship for a few months, before breaking up only weeks before the body was found. However, the manuscript of the newsletter were actually hinting at the reason for August’s years as a teen behind bars- tripping up into a boyfriend relationship with a gangster, and joining his crew of reckless young adults with dangerous ability.


Part three]

(interview w/ @LUR10934) Luna was in a small room, she decided to call one of the wittnesses. “Hello, I've heard one of your parents were victims of this strand mvrder on the loose. Do you have any ideas of who the mvrder might have been?”
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@SongBirdCat_ two errors lol, *strange and *witnesses
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@SongBirdCat_ Willow stumbled into the room, tissue in hand, her eyes red and dark. “Oh, sorry, what?” She sniffled out with a sob. “Oh, oh, I don’t know…” She took a sideways glance at the door, tensing up considerably
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@LUR10934 “One of my reporters have some mysterious clues that were left behind,” She said. “Does any of this look familiar?” (Lol I'm such a bad interviewer, i don't like talking to lots of people tho)
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@SongBirdCat_ Willow gasped,clenching her hands together. “Mother’s scarf!” She reached towards it, her eyes wide but the smallest smile creeping on. “Oh, mother’s scarf!” She took a step back as she realized the blood stained on it, red splotches dotted around.
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@LUR10934 Luna stays silent for a moment, then realizes the mvrder had left fingerprints on the scarf. She noticed that the blccd was in a unique pattern - a fingerprint. “The mvrder left fingerprints on the scarf, did you notice unfamiliar things in the house that wasn't there before?”
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@SongBirdCat_ “A shoe..” She trailed off, reaching for another tissue, stuffing the other in her pocket. “But..” She paused, her eyes burning. “Alana thought it was fashionable, so she styled it…” Willow gulped, overcome. “Oh, and.. mother’s jewellery box..was upturned.”
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@SongBirdCat_ * hey are you online? I know you have finished you’re weekly, but could we possibly continue rping so I can get 200 words /gen /nooffence
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@LUR10934 Willow paused for a moment. “I think so, at least. My minds a little blurry.” She looked down at the floor, shaking slightly, tears blurring in her eyes. “Yes, I’m sure I’m right..” She looked up, shivering. “Perhaps I’m not the best person to ask..”
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@SongBirdCat_ “But maybe I am?..” She trailed off, panic bleeding before her eyes. “Oh..” She held her head, eyes closed, pain seeping into her head. “Everything just seems so blurry- last week I was hugging my mum, doing everything with her, baking, saying goodnight before bed- but..that was only a week ago.” She burst into tears, red in the face, eyes bulging, her lips quivering. “Now I can’t ever do that again.” She choked between sobs.


Part Four PART FIVE- EVERYTHING CLICKS
I’m sitting here in bed, four in the morning, listening to the silence of the camp. The eeriness of it all, the gloom, like fog coming down, ready to hide murderers. The murderer.
I hear a small stick crack and the creak of the old crusty bed mattresses. That sure gives me a fright, cowering under the duvet, whimpering in fear.
Autumn would tell me to blurrilly stop wimping up, man up, we’ve got detectiving to do. But she’s sleeping right now, and she has no idea.
Because even people in the cabin, like Jay could be it. Unlikely, but stabbing is a surprisingly easy task, Autumn said even I could have done it. Obviously I haven’t but still.
. . . .
The first thing Autumn says to me today is “Let’s confront May.”
I don’t really see why, but I don’t know how to sign the word May, my hearing aid batteries are dead and I can’t be bothered to speak, it requires extra effort and I have no patience at this moment.
I just nod, gather the evidence pointed against her and sit outside the cabin- everyone else is likely at mess hall, getting medicine or some other useful and needed chore. Nobody should be in their cabin.
When I think about it, it could be May.
After all, the footsteps of May's type? Well, I mean, I saw August (the roommate) wearing a similar pair, but both August’s obviously didn’t do it.
And then the manuscript in May and August (not May’s sister,her roommate- lets call her August R) cabin. All evidence pointed towards may.
So we went in.
. . . .
The first thing you saw was that May’s bed was empty, bed sheets strewed across the room, the pillow stretched out on the ground.
She obviously wasn’t there.
In fact, it seemed like nobody was their.
The chatter from the mess hall has disappeared into what is close to quiet, meaning everyone is dozing around in their cabins.
So where is May?
Then I notice a figure in the darkness of the top bunk in the corner standing upright, holding something hard in the dark.
I hear the clink of metal hitting stone, sparks fly from the knife, red and orange sparks of fire.
Wait- the knife?
And then I realize- the murderer is watching us.
. . .
I adjust my eyes to the dark, breathing in and out, my eyes wide with panic. The murderer- but it doesn’t seem to be May.
The murderer looks at me, smiling a small but sleek smile. Her eyes meet mine, piercing blue and grey, dots of brown and gold.
I know those eyes.
August.
August R.
. . . . .
She laughs. A horrible laugh, faded into white noise, bleeding in my head, bright lights seering across my face, blinding me.
“Oh. Looks like you found my little secret.”
She makes it sound like they found a lolly pocket, the camp version of a Lolly Stash. Or maybe something like a banned item (COTTON SOCKS) or her diary.
But she hadn’t been found out for a scandal in pink fairy stationary- no.
She had been found out for murder, deadly murder.
And then I realize.
She has a knife.
She is moving quickly down the ladder, weapon in hand.
What am I doing?
Staying here- Autumn has already made a run for it.
And then I flee.

hang on a second-
Why not just record yourself singing? Even if you're a bad singer, it probably won't be much worse or probably better than whatever the text-to-singing comes up with.

You mean you want this?

play scream (scream) for (0.25) beats

j.k
but I don't think this is a good idea as you should probably just record some singing using some ai voice generator

Prime689 wrote:

LANCEBOX1104 wrote:

(#4)

Eason_9 wrote:

Any remixes that contains noticeable changes are valid.

I think there needs to be more rule it should be a significant change like new physics, costumes, game name, new abilities stuff like that

That sounds too specific for how broad a project could be. What we could resort to is just telling people that they have to make a meaningful change when they remix. What is not meaningful is easily picked out by the majority (excluding recolors).

Why recolors????????????????????????

LANCEBOX1104 wrote:

(#4)

Eason_9 wrote:

Any remixes that contains noticeable changes are valid.

I think there needs to be more rule it should be a significant change like new physics, costumes, game name, new abilities stuff like that

That sounds too specific for how broad a project could be. What we could resort to is just telling people that they have to make a meaningful change when they remix. What is not meaningful is easily picked out by the majority (excluding recolors).

hydrofungus wrote:

WallydogChoppychop wrote:

Support. I completely agree with everything you said here, It would also be nice if scratch could allow images starting with the name: https://scratch.com

you know that site’s taken right

I mean websites starting with s c r a t c h . c o m or h t t p s : / / u p l o a d s . s c r a t c h

Eason_9 wrote:

(#3)
Any remixes that contains noticeable changes are valid.

Noticeable changes are not always considered “meaningful” enough to be a valid remix. You could put a random shape but that wouldn't be considered meaningful. It must have a meaningful change that sets it apart from the original project.

Eason_9 wrote:

Any remixes that contains noticeable changes are valid.

I think there needs to be more rule it should be a significant change like new physics, costumes, game name, new abilities stuff like that

cactus-cacti wrote:

randomguy3513 wrote:

LP372 wrote:

useful for multiplayer games

can't you just code your own player counter? I think that's possible.

would that work like this:

when I receive [player joins v]
change [(cloud) player count v] by (1)

It's not that simple as when a player leaves, how do you detect that?
And what if someone has 100 tabs open of the same page?

Weekly Four:
MYSTERY

AKA THE GREAT BRASS HEIST!!!

Extention: https://scratch.mit.edu/projects/914066871/#comments-393235343

Part One:

To begin your mystery, wander on over to @PoppyWriter's workshop to learn how to plot one! After you've read and internalized the information, write short, 50 word descriptions each for five major plot points in your tale. Be as creative as you like, and feel free to include some classic mystery elements as well.

Exposition: Nelliel and the various members of the brass section walked into the band room like any normal day, just to find everything brass related missing. So they decide to investigate this, by looking around the band room, interrogating each section as well as the band teacher, and getting to the bottom of this so they can play.

Rising Action: The brass buddies go around, investigating every section and every inch of the band room. They run into some issues with the percussion section, while the saxophones just goofed off. However, the flutes and the band director gave some valuable information. Suddenly, they remember: They should check the cameras.

Climax: Running to the office, they watch the cameras, to see it was the 7th grade band students all along. Nelliel, and multiple other brass members, have siblings and other friends in the younger grade, who all got together to play a prank, specifically on the brass section, led by Nelliel's sister.

Falling Action: As they make their way to the band room, finding their instruments and music hidden in the uniform room, the brass buddies realize something. How did the 7th graders get in without a key? Nelliel realizes this, and interrogates their beloved band teacher once again. Finally, the band teacher spilled everything.

Resolution: Once they found out the band teacher helped the 7th graders with their evil scheme, Nelliel and her buddies all went on strike…until the band teacher promised to pay them back with pizza. Then, they all got set up, and off went another normal…well as normal as band could be…rehearsal.
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Part 2:
Clue 1: The brass buddies search the band room and find that the uniform room, which was never locked, is suddenly locked today. Searching the blue room and the band teachers office, they find those rooms are unlocked like normal. However, the uniform room is locked tighter then the windows after the music app kids climbed out of them.

Red Herring 2: The brass buddies innterigate the percussion section. The junior bass drum player says he knows nothing about the instrument. The freshman marimba player claims he probably did it, but kept laughing and running off when asked more. He was declared the number one suspect in the investigation. The freshman snare drum player just shrugged, ignoring them.

Clue 3: When asking the flute players, one of the flute players with a younger sibling in 7th grade said her sibling had been acting weird, but they didn't ask anything more. She also states that the brass instruments were all gone in advisory the day before, but she just assumed Nelliel had ordered a mass practice like she sometimes does and everyone actually listened this time.

? 4: The band teacher refused to answer many of the questions, showering Nelliel with papers to print out to “replace the missing brass sheet music”. He also refused to unlock the uniform closet. However, there was a lone original from a song they had played the semester before on his desk, one that had been residing in the uniform room for the past three months, with no one taking it out.

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Part 3:

Greetings, wanderer - and welcome to the third part of this weekly! Find yourself a partner, and together embark upon an interview. One of you can claim the role of a witness to a crime, whereas the other can wield the power of an interviewer. Go ahead and ask the most ridiculous questions, and answer with the most unexpected responses! Once you’ve completed your interview, it’s time to jot down your conversation. To move onto the next part of this weekly, write 200 words per person for this activity. Have fun with this - after all, every witness carries a small piece of the truth ;D

Nelliel (Me, interigator): Nelliel stalked up to a person in the band room. It was still the morning, so it could be honestly. “Hello. I’m investigating the disappearance of the brass section’s instruments. Would you happen to know anything about that?”

Ekatsim (@A-Sad-Invention, witness): ekatsim turns around, startled. “the brass section's instruments?” she thinks for a moment. “i don't really know, they were there when i last saw them… maybe yesterday?”

Nelliel (Me, interigator): Are you sure? Was anyone acting suspious? Did you see anyone with a brass instrument that doesn't play brass?:

Ekatsim (@A-Sad-Invention, witness):“i'm not sure. i think gurtle was the last one out, so he might know something about it? but i didn't see him at our rehearsal today, so i don't know where he went.”

Nelliel (Me, interigator): “I don't believe I've met Gurtle. Also, did Mr. Fraklin seem off to you today or what? I asked him about my instrument disappearing, and he refused to speak with me!”

Ekatsim (@A-Sad-Invention, witness): “now that i think about it, he was being a little sus.” ekatsim suddenly remembered something that happened the day before. “he told me to stay in the percussion instruments room when i was passing by the brass room.”

Nelliel (Me, interigator): “Odd. He doesn't normally let people in there without him or a student leader in their. Not after the music application kids climbed out the window onto the roof. Somethings off about him>”

Ekatsim (@A-Sad-Invention, witness): “i agree,” ekatsim nodded. “he's been kind of off all week, actually- i just attributed it to the upcoming orchestra performance, but i think it might be related to the brass instruments' disappearance. do you know if he's still here?”

Nelliel (Me, interigator): “He's actually off printing copies. Not having me do it for once in my life. Maybe it's because he knows I'm stressed about all of the brass instruments disappearing. I would have had the whole brass section set up by now but all our instruments, even the sheet music out of our cubbies are just gone!” Nelliel said, frowning. “I swear, if he was a part of this, he is SO fired,” she said, muttering the familiar joke of the band. “Once he gets in here, I'll ask him again.”


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Part 4:

Welcome, detectives, to the final part of this splendiforous weekly! For your fourth activity, you’ll be combining everything you’ve worked on in previous parts into a longer piece. Using your plot points, red herrings, clues, and evidence from the witness interview, write a mystery scene of at least 550 words. You can go about this however you’d like: it could be a snippet of a longer work or its own self-contained story. Make it gripping, make it exciting, make it page-turning (or in this case, screen-scrolling?), and above all, make it mysterious ;D Best of luck, sleuths, and remember to have fun!

Nelliel walks into the band room, a uqinue pep in her step, one she did not have walking into any of her other classes. Of course she was happy, this was band, her favorite class…well besides choir and jazz band. She mingled with some of the various students in the classroom, some in highschool band, others in 7th and 8th grade band, while others took a different class in the band room or was just there to chill with friends. She did this, greeting various people, until around five mintues before the morning bell. Then, she went to set up like normal. First she made sure everyone in the brass section was here…the mighty three of them. After assuring they were all there, she grabbed three chairs, pushing them over to the section they always sat at. Then she grabbed three stands, setting them up. Then she walked over to the instument rack to find her french horn gone. Along with every other french horn and every other brass instument. “WHERE ARE THEY? CHRISTINA? WHAT DID YOU DO?” Nelliel shouted, storming across the band room floor to the freshman trumpet player, notorious for stealing Nelliel's mouthpiece…and her horn at times. Christina's eyes widen in panic as she tries to figure out what she did. “Uh- What did I do?”
“Our intruments! They're gone!” Nelliel said.
“I don't know. It wasn't me this time. Have you asked Mr. Franklin?” Christina asked.
Nelliel shook her head, sprinting to Mr. Franklin's desk. He was sitting there, on his laptop, doing random band teacher stuff. “What's up, Nelliel?” he asked her, looking up.
“Where are our instuments?” she demanded.
“Did you take them home to practice?” came his innocent reply.
“No- I had vocal music to practice,” came her retort.
“I don't know. Have you looked for them?” he replied.
Nelliel just glared at him, stalking off to go search the side rooms of the band room. Checking Mr. Frankin's office, she quickly cleared it. “Nothing in there,” she muttered. Then she walked to the uniform room. “Odd. Locked. This room is never locked,” she said to herself. Then she ran over to the blue room, the place they stored a variety of sheet music and marching drums. “Nothing out of place here,” she said.
Nelliel decided to start interigating various band members, consious that they were rapidly running out of time. She rushed over to the perucussion section. “Did any of y'all steal my brass section's instruments?” she demanded. “I STOLE THEM!” a freshman snare drum player shouted.
“Really? Where?” Nelliel demanded.
“I'm just joking…or am I?” the snare player said, running off to go mess with his friends.
Nelliel frowned, asking every other precussion player, to no avail. She then interigated the saxaphones who were all goofy or aggresive towards Nelliel. “Geez,” Nelliel muttered, walking to the flutes. “You see our instuments?” she asked a fellow sophmore, Sasha, who played flute. “No. But my 7th grade brother was acting really weird yesterday. I also happened to notice they were gone before advisory…I know you weren't in advisory yesterday because of homework but yeah.”
“Interesting…” Nelliel said, walking to the clairnets. After a short talk with Ekatsim, she muttered, “I swear, if he was a part of this, he is SO fired,” she said, muttering the familiar joke of the band. “Once he gets in here, I'll ask him again,” she said, deciding to go talk to Mr. Franklin again.
Walking over, she began piecing together the clues. “Mr. Franklin. I know what happened. Our wonderful 7th grade band siblings worked togather to hide our instuments. The uniform room is locked, so they have to be in their. Can I have a key, so I can get into the uniform room please?” Nelliel asked.
Mr. Franklin just chuckled. “Actually, I need to go print out the latest rhytmn chart. Mind starting the class for me?” he said, before quickly exiting the room.
Nelliel stood in shock, unsure what to do. Then she noticed a piece of music on his desk, a song for last years concert, an original copy, that had lived in the uniform room for the past 6 months.
“MR. FRANKLIN! YOU ARE SO FIRED!” Nelliel shouted after him, frustrated at his antics. But a part of her was also grinning. She knew this was a prank. Mr. Franklin was in on the prank as well. She knew Mr. Franklin fit the band room well. And she wouldn't trade it for anything in the world. Evetually, after failing to get the class in order, and leading the small handful of kids who would listen to her in breathing warm-ups, Mr. Franklin came back, a whole stack of papers in his hand.
“Good job Nelliel!” he said, handing her the key to the uniform room as a reward for trying to keep the class in line. The three brass members quickly retreieved their instuments, setting up, and joining the song of the band.
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Yo! I have a new game out!
https://scratch.mit.edu/projects/982252147/

It's called Flappy Egg! I made it for easter Go play it now! Make sure to leave a heart and star

SONIC UNLEASHED: TOPDOWN UPDATE

Egg Dragoon: V.1.01, added final cutscenes and finished up rank time and style system.

Hedgehog Day Test Place: all features are in place except the ring mechanic, because it's hard to figure out for me. I don't know if I should just make it a random area, since it could spawn in the water, or a specific guideline but that would be hard to make since I can't:

1: make individual sprites that would take up data until I hit the max data on one game,

2: or make individual clones which would not only take a long time to do but be an absolute PAAAAAIN to make. I do, however, have an idea to have a stat then make them be places depending on the stat like so:

if <[(cloneNumber)] = [23]> then
go to x: (23) y: (23)
end

Werehog Night Test Place: Being planned. Already have:

punch and claw. no combos (yet? need feedback)
player sprite
a health Sistema consisting of 5 hits. if anyone has a better system, please do share

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ok I'm done thanks for reading

if <nighttime> then 

set [currentForm v] to [Werehog]

else
set [currentForm v] to [Hedgehog]
end

Sonic Unleashed: TOPDOWN

Initial Thoughts: Wow, this is such a powerful beginning. It grabbed my attention with just the first few words, even with such little context. I can already tell this is going to be very poetic, gripping, and hard to pick apart.

It is known for its frivolity and ebullient spirits, its mirth, laughter and brightness
Was. I keep forgetting, although I pick my way through the destruction.

I absolutely love these lines. I feel like I can hear the narrator pause at the line break before the tense correction.

“We’ll take care of you,” whispered Marie as we sat together, bones protruding at every angle.

This line confused me a little, because it sounds like Marie is included in the “we” but is also the caretaker. You might want to shift it around a bit to clarify the difference between the two.

If my brother was quiet, it was serious. I could feel the pulse of his emotions, every ache in his heart. It was special, our bond. Mama used to say we were inseparable.

I love how simple and sweet this brief description of their relationship is. It's very powerful, and it instantly reminds me of my own brother. These lines are very relatable, which is great, and it makes me want to see more of their relationship.

Like the chocolate - a rare treat that Marie’s husband, Henri would often pull out of his pocket with a twinkle in his eyes. Long, arduous games of chess with her eldest daughter who had keen eyes and a sweet smile.

The switch between the italicized and normal text adds so much depth to this story. The memory and commentary of it is a little choppy, but it feels very intentional and stylistic. I personally really like it because I feel like it gives the reader a glimpse into the emotions the narrator is feeling in the present without directly stating them. Also random side note: I'm a big fan of all the French names <3

“Admit defeat. Julien, you are more proud than your father.”
They laughed simultaneously, but there was no mirth in it. Elodie sighed softly.
“I am sorry. I should not have said that.”

This small little interaction speaks volumes. All the things left unsaid between them seem palpable and I just want to keep reading. Your writing style is so poetic and beautiful, and it truly shines through here. This is one of my favorite parts so far because it says so much in so few words.

“Why ladybug? It is a strange word.”
Julien shrugged. “It is her favourite.”

Wow, this is more telling than the commentary that follows. It's incredibly sweet, and I love the symbol you create here- I'm hoping it comes back later

This day felt different. Like nostalgia and hazy memories, our childhood friendship clung to the air as a reminder of what had been.
I turned away from the sunlight, letting the darkness hide my anguish.
I did not trust myself to speak for a couple moments.
“I know.”

Incredible- These lines are my new favorites. You have such a talent for expressing powerful emotions in only a few well-placed words. I can't get over how hard this hits and how every single word has its place. I'm blown away by your style, and especially this little snippet of the narrator's memories.

The threads that were meant to hold me together were stubbornness and patience.

I think this line is a little clunky. I'd try to rewrite it because it's a little confusing after the line before it (which is a great start by the way). Were stubbornness and patience the threads holding the narrator together? Or was that his hope? I just think this could be clarified a bit. <3

When my brother had fled town, rolling in debt and embroiled in scandal, I paid off every last penny. Like the man I was meant to be, the man he would never come close to me.

This sentence is a little jarring. If that's the intention, definitely leave it how it is. But the contrast between Julien being in love and then suddenly running off threw me for a loop. Also, is the last part supposed to be “the man he would never come close to being”? Those last few words are a little confusing after the start of that sentence, but I don't think it's too hard to rework.

Marie clutched at my hand. Marie, strength and kindness incarnate. Marie, who rescued birds with broken wings, Marie who nursed us through scarlet fever and almost died, Marie who treated us as if we were her own.
“Julien,” she said, sobbing. Her frail body was shaking.
Elodie lifted her head from the table, her red-rimmed eyes the only sign of grief.
“Why must we go on, Maman? When the villagers spit and gossip at us, all for one boy.

I love how much backstory and character you fit in here from their words and actions alone. You truly have a knack for showing not telling.

She spoke bitterly but I knew she was nursing a broken heart. Her room was next to mine and listened to tortured cries in her sleep. He haunted her at night, haunted all of us.
He’d left indelible marks on every inch of this house.

First of all, I love this part. The impact of Julien's actions are felt so strongly, and I'm blown away by it all. The one thing that interrupted the flow was that I think you meant “I listened to tortured cries” (you forgot the I <3), and that would improve the readability of the sentence.

But the old cordiality began to pale in comparison to what was blooming.

I'm so invested at this point, my heart dropped at this line. Part of me was worried for what would happen if Julien returned, and the other part of me was cheering because Elodie seems like such a kind, sweet character and she deserves better than someone who won't care for her. I love your characterization because I feel like I know the characters very well even though I haven't actually seen them much in action.

Even April rain showers could not marr the beauty and the fragility of our love.

This line is so beautiful. I have no words. I want this on a poster or on my phone wallpaper honestly. Wow. I'm getting all the feels from this and enjoying every step of the way.

And then.
Him, like a hurricane on a gentle spring evening, when the hum of nature filled the air. A tidal wave in a calm ocean, thrashing with rage.

Such a powerful entry- the tension was building up to this moment, even with all the happy vibes, and I'm so curious to find out what happens next. Your skills in building suspense are amazing.

“Betrayal,” he hissed in Elodie’s ear. He made no attempt at hiding the venomous hatred he felt towards me.
He brandished a knife, threatening me to come closer. Restraining Elodie by the waist, holding her hostage.

This is so cinematic- I can literally hear the backtrack in my head. I'm honestly getting antsy as I interrupt my reading to add my thoughts.

“Enjoy your happiness. May your days be fruitful, bright and abundant.”


He struck a match, and set fire to our house. I lunged for the door, only to find it locked. My brother had taken our only key. Bolted every window with a vengeance. I ran to the kitchen and grabbed the first thing I saw: a rolling pin. I smashed the window, glass shards shattered and decorated the floor. Elodie screamed, and stumbled. The soles of her feet were red, tender and swollen.

Ok, I got a little lost here. Did Julien leave the narrator and Elodie in the house? Or is he in there with them? It's unclear who's present in the moment, which might be intentional because of the urgency of the scene. After reading this, I assume it's just the two of them, but I can't be quite sure.

She removed the hand pressed to her stomach, only to reveal a large, gaping wound. The tyrant had been threatening her with a knife. How had I not noticed my wife cry out? How could I be so uncaring, so selfish?

ALKJFSKDJ THIS LINE- So many things dropped here. I love the grand reveal of her wound, as well as the extreme betrayal from his brother, and also- wife? No wonder there's so much tension. And his internal conflict is exquisite (in a nice way lol). *chef's kiss*

“You will die.”
“There is no me without you, Elodie.”
“ I know. I know, but you must go. Please. Please. For me.”

This is incredibly heartbreaking in the best way possible. It feels so real and painful and I adore it. Also I just noticed how the memories are no longer in italics, which makes them feel more fresh and realistic. I don't know if that was intentional, but if so, it's brilliant.

I hope you will never know the strength and pain it takes to leave someone you love in a burning house.

This line. I'm broken.

For the brother, whom I’d so selfishly sacrificed, to pay for my cruelty.

I don't really get this line. It was never quite explained how/if the narrator sacrificed Julien, nor how/if the narrator was ever cruel and what spacifically he has to pay for. Maybe clarify this or change it up?

You shouldn’t believe everything you read, dear reader.
I was the one who ran away from town.

Woah, this gave me chills. I'm reeling and my brain's rewinding the story. I'm definitely going to have to read this again for full effect. Incredible.

I started the fire, with the cowardly rage that was always hidden away.
Although, I have always loved Elodie. Longer than even him, perhaps.

And with this, I understand the line that confused me. Absolutely please do not change it- Oh snap, this is so good.

And maybe, reader, I have lied to you. Maybe I have blurred the lines between truth and reality, so much so you begin to question who speaks to you.
Is he feral or is he broken?

Wow, now he's reading my mind. I was just thinking that I probably shouldn't trust him completely when I reread. Also, your use of the direct address to the reader is beautiful. I feel spoken to, and it's a little eerie.

Blood is blood, he said to me, when I tried to stop him from turning himself in at the station.
“We are family.”

And sometimes, family can mean terrible things.

Oh my gosh, that was such a good ending- At this point I don't know if the narrator is Julien or not, but it doesn't matter because this is so twisty and turny, and there were so many unexpected surprises. This ending left me in shock, even after the initial plot twist, which is so awesome. I'm excited to reread this now before sharing my final thoughts. :0

Final Thoughts: I don't have enough words to describe quite how powerful and intense this story is. It's definitely one that I could read over an over again, with so many lines that are just gems. I would 100% consider using this as your writing comp entry because it's extremely emotional and I adored every single plot twist, and there were many. You are an incredibly talented author, and I would love to see more of your writing. This absolutely blew me away, so keep up the good work! <333

yadayadayadagoodbye wrote:

Xzillox wrote:

Za-Chary wrote:

sing [skibidi] at note (62 v) for (0.5) beats

I'm assuming the “beats” input changes the speed at which it is sung? Although that isn't exactly the most musically pleasing prospect, it seems like a pretty good way to implement melody. It doesn't need to be complex because low floor and all that, plus the other music blocks aren't complex.

Beats likely refers to a beat, as described in sheet music (which in most common cases, refers to a quarter note, but can refer to other notes such as eigth notes when the time signature is to be changed)

If this was added, a “tempo” block for the TTS would likely be required, and so would a “time signature” block (though its also viable to simply have it stay on 4/4 times)

Why would a “time signature” block be needed? One beat in 4/4 is the same as one beat in 3/4.

A clicker game is easy to make.

See this post for more details, but here's a small snipit:

achouse wrote:

What is a valid remix?

When deciding if something is or isn’t a valid remix, we consider if the changes made added something new to the project and were not clearly made to get around our guidelines on remixing. If someone has done something like only changing the title of a project, deleting the original creator’s username from the title page, or scribbling on top of someone else’s art, that is not considered valid. But if they did something like changing the sprite in a platformer or creating a new background for a pong game, that is a valid remix.

Are recolors or traced art considered valid remixes?

Yes. By recoloring the art from another project or tracing art, Scratchers have made a change to the project, so recolors and traced art are valid remixes as long as credit is provided to the original creator.