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Hello there.

So cast: Optimus prime, bumblebee, ironhide, ratchet, jazz, arcee. (idk who else)
Also where should the setting be? Cybertron or earth?

Optimusfreakingprime wrote:

Hello there.

gEnErAl KenObI!? yOu ArE a BaLd OnE!!!

“Oh no, my hair! Where’d it go this time!?”

Optimusfreakingprime wrote:

So cast: Optimus prime, bumblebee, ironhide, ratchet, jazz, arcee. (idk who else)
Also where should the setting be? Cybertron or earth?

So, no Decepticons?

Also i think i might need a new PFP.

ArgyleE1 wrote:

Optimusfreakingprime wrote:

So cast: Optimus prime, bumblebee, ironhide, ratchet, jazz, arcee. (idk who else)
Also where should the setting be? Cybertron or earth?

So, no Decepticons?

maybe……. i want to know what you think. should this be the past or the present?

Optimusfreakingprime wrote:

Also i think i might need a new PFP.

Yea, you’ve had that one for a long time

Optimusfreakingprime wrote:

ArgyleE1 wrote:

Optimusfreakingprime wrote:

So cast: Optimus prime, bumblebee, ironhide, ratchet, jazz, arcee. (idk who else)
Also where should the setting be? Cybertron or earth?

So, no Decepticons?

maybe……. i want to know what you think. should this be the past or the present?

I’ve always wanted to make a transformers story on Cybertron. Though, drawing backgrounds for Cybertron could be more challenging then drawing backgrounds for Earth

Ok earth it is. Buuuuuuuuut if you are up to the challenge then we will do Cybertron.

ArgyleE1 wrote:

Optimusfreakingprime wrote:

Also i think i might need a new PFP.

Yea, you’ve had that one for a long time

Can you make me one? I think I need one that is not from the internet.

Optimusfreakingprime wrote:

ArgyleE1 wrote:

Optimusfreakingprime wrote:

ArgyleE1 wrote:

Optimusfreakingprime wrote:

We should start making the script for this movie.

Can you make it? I'll remix it if i want to change anything.

Who are the villains, if there even is any? Who are all the main characters?

It's transformers. Plus, I think we should add a small history of prime and Megatron.

It actually happening, like, on Cybertron, or through flashbacks and stuff? (As in the small history of Megs and Prime)

Yeah. But this is the path of the autobots about how they leave cybertron

I’ve always wanted to make a Transformers movie that can be described as just that. “The path of the autobots about how they leave cybertron“

ArgyleE1 wrote:

Optimusfreakingprime wrote:

ArgyleE1 wrote:

Optimusfreakingprime wrote:

ArgyleE1 wrote:

Optimusfreakingprime wrote:

We should start making the script for this movie.

Can you make it? I'll remix it if i want to change anything.

Who are the villains, if there even is any? Who are all the main characters?

It's transformers. Plus, I think we should add a small history of prime and Megatron.

It actually happening, like, on Cybertron, or through flashbacks and stuff? (As in the small history of Megs and Prime)

Yeah. But this is the path of the autobots about how they leave cybertron

I’ve always wanted to make a Transformers movie that can be described as just that. “The path of the autobots about how they leave cybertron“

Optimusfreakingprime wrote:

ArgyleE1 wrote:

Optimusfreakingprime wrote:

ArgyleE1 wrote:

Optimusfreakingprime wrote:

ArgyleE1 wrote:

Optimusfreakingprime wrote:

We should start making the script for this movie.

Can you make it? I'll remix it if i want to change anything.

Who are the villains, if there even is any? Who are all the main characters?

It's transformers. Plus, I think we should add a small history of prime and Megatron.

It actually happening, like, on Cybertron, or through flashbacks and stuff? (As in the small history of Megs and Prime)

Yeah. But this is the path of the autobots about how they leave cybertron

I’ve always wanted to make a Transformers movie that can be described as just that. “The path of the autobots about how they leave cybertron“

Do you need an animator?

trideveloper wrote:

Do you need an animator?

Yes. Can you animate?

ArgyleE1 wrote:

trideveloper wrote:

Do you need an animator?

Yes. Can you animate?

Ok

trideveloper wrote:

ArgyleE1 wrote:

trideveloper wrote:

Do you need an animator?

Yes. Can you animate?

Ok

I’m assuming that’s a yes. Do you animate with bitmap (drawing something different each frame) or vector (models)?

Who is this man?

ArgyleE1 wrote:

trideveloper wrote:

ArgyleE1 wrote:

trideveloper wrote:

Do you need an animator?

Yes. Can you animate?

Ok

I’m assuming that’s a yes. Do you animate with bitmap (drawing something different each frame) or vector (models)?

If he can animate, I hope he can animate our concept arts. I want to start a trailer. I have the perfect music for that. What I've done. By linken park.

Optimusfreakingprime wrote:

ArgyleE1 wrote:

trideveloper wrote:

ArgyleE1 wrote:

trideveloper wrote:

Do you need an animator?

Yes. Can you animate?

Ok

I’m assuming that’s a yes. Do you animate with bitmap (drawing something different each frame) or vector (models)?

If he can animate, I hope he can animate our concept arts. I want to start a trailer. I have the perfect music for that. What I've done. By linken park.

Oooh that’s ones really good, and is in the transformers movies.

I'll be offline now. G'night.

Hi all, I had to remove a bunch of posts because they edged on being mean spirited (keep in mind that saying you're going to report something or someone counts as an attack comment, which is in violation of the “Help Keep the site friendly” Community Guidelines rule).

Additionally, please keep in mind that the forums are accessible to viewing and posting by anyone, and anything you post on the Scratch website is never “confidential” or “private”. If someone stumbles across a collab topic and you're not open to adding new collaborators, just politely decline their offer and move on.

cheddargirl wrote:

Hi all, I had to remove a bunch of posts because they edged on being mean spirited (keep in mind that saying you're going to report something or someone counts as an attack comment, which is in violation of the “Help Keep the site friendly” Community Guidelines rule).

Additionally, please keep in mind that the forums are accessible to viewing and posting by anyone, and anything you post on the Scratch website is never “confidential” or “private”. If someone stumbles across a collab topic and you're not open to adding new collaborators, just politely decline their offer and move on.

I have a feeling this forum is cursed or something. You keep popping out of nowhere lol.


In all seriousness, I am truly sorry for what I said. I’m sure if @Optimusfreakingprime was online currently he’d say the same.

cheddargirl wrote:

Hi all, I had to remove a bunch of posts because they edged on being mean spirited (keep in mind that saying you're going to report something or someone counts as an attack comment, which is in violation of the “Help Keep the site friendly” Community Guidelines rule).

Additionally, please keep in mind that the forums are accessible to viewing and posting by anyone, and anything you post on the Scratch website is never “confidential” or “private”. If someone stumbles across a collab topic and you're not open to adding new collaborators, just politely decline their offer and move on.

You’re right about the part about nothing being private on scratch, btw. I’m sorry, I was just…..looking for some excuse to report. I didn’t really see a reason to report, but I did anyway, and I don’t know why. Reporting is not a tool to use like that. I’m sorry.

BUDDY

Optimusfreakingprime wrote:

BUDDY

BUDDY

This is what I’ve got so far. I cut out a bit from the begining cause it’s irrelevant, so some of this might be a bit confusing cause it’s out of context. Let me know what you think. Btw Orion and Magnus are in a bar. This also takes place in Cybertron. Alright, here we go:

EPISODE 1, SCENE 1:


Magnus: Took you long enough.

Orion: Sorry I’m late, I was….uh……

Magnus looks at Orion suspiciously.

Orion: …..oh yea! I decided to walk this time, so it took longer than usual.

Magnus: You always walk here.

Magnus: Were you-?

Orion (interrupting Magnus): *sigh* Fine. I was at another protest.

Magnus: I have a feeling you weren’t just standing in the background.

Orion: I was the one leading the protest, so what?!

Magnus: Sooner or later you’re gonna get in some real trouble with the police. You have to be more careful.

Orion: Why worry when my best friend is a captain of the police! You’ll just back me up.

Magnus (slightly irritated): I have a duty, Orion. And that duty is to protect Cybertron and to keep the peace, even if that means arresting you.

Orion sits straight(er) up in his chair and looks off into the distance.

Magnus: Some day, you won’t have me to back you up.

Orion looks back at Magnus and leans onto the table.

Orion: Magnus, please. You’re the only friend I have. I—

Magnus (interrupting Orion): You’re not gonna have any friends if you keep this up, Orion!

Orion: I—

Magnus (angry, interrupting Orion): Good night!

Magnus stands up and walks out of the bar.

Maccadam (bartender): Tough luck, huh.

Orion (irritated): *sigh* Yep.

Maccadam: You know, a lot of people agree with you.

Orion looks over his shoulder to look at Maccadam (his back is facing Maccadam)

Orion: What?

Maccadam: You think the law is wrong. That Cybertronians should be able to choose their place of work. Right?

Orion: ….yea, why?

Maccadam: I’m just saying, more people agree with that cause then you’ll ever know.

Orion: Yea, well why aren’t they doing anything about it?!

Maccadam (speaking while pouring a drink): That’s just the thing. They’re too scared. They don’t wanna get in all that—(Maccadam puts down the liquified Energon canister)—drama.

Maccadam smiles at Orion, then drinks some of the Energon he just poured.

Orion: Then who’s gonna do it? If no one says anything, nothing will change.

Maccadam nudges his head at Orion, then walks to the back of the store.

Orion stares off into the distance, thinking. He smiles, nods to himself, then exits the bar.

ArgyleE1 wrote:

This is what I’ve got so far. I cut out a bit from the begining cause it’s irrelevant, so some of this might be a bit confusing cause it’s out of context. Let me know what you think. Btw Orion and Magnus are in a bar. This also takes place in Cybertron. Alright, here we go:

EPISODE 1, SCENE 1:


Magnus: Took you long enough.

Orion: Sorry I’m late, I was….uh……

Magnus looks at Orion suspiciously.

Orion: …..oh yea! I decided to walk this time, so it took longer than usual.

Magnus: You always walk here.

Magnus: Were you-?

Orion (interrupting Magnus): *sigh* Fine. I was at another protest.

Magnus: I have a feeling you weren’t just standing in the background.

Orion: I was the one leading the protest, so what?!

Magnus: Sooner or later you’re gonna get in some real trouble with the police. You have to be more careful.

Orion: Why worry when my best friend is a captain of the police! You’ll just back me up.

Magnus (slightly irritated): I have a duty, Orion. And that duty is to protect Cybertron and to keep the peace, even if that means arresting you.

Orion sits straight(er) up in his chair and looks off into the distance.

Magnus: Some day, you won’t have me to back you up.

Orion looks back at Magnus and leans onto the table.

Orion: Magnus, please. You’re the only friend I have. I—

Magnus (interrupting Orion): You’re not gonna have any friends if you keep this up, Orion!

Orion: I—

Magnus (angry, interrupting Orion): Good night!

Magnus stands up and walks out of the bar.

Maccadam (bartender): Tough luck, huh.

Orion (irritated): *sigh* Yep.

Maccadam: You know, a lot of people agree with you.

Orion looks over his shoulder to look at Maccadam (his back is facing Maccadam)

Orion: What?

Maccadam: You think the law is wrong. That Cybertronians should be able to choose their place of work. Right?

Orion: ….yea, why?

Maccadam: I’m just saying, more people agree with that cause then you’ll ever know.

Orion: Yea, well why aren’t they doing anything about it?!

Maccadam (speaking while pouring a drink): That’s just the thing. They’re too scared. They don’t wanna get in all that—(Maccadam puts down the liquified Energon canister)—drama.

Maccadam smiles at Orion, then drinks some of the Energon he just poured.

Orion: Then who’s gonna do it? If no one says anything, nothing will change.

Maccadam nudges his head at Orion, then walks to the back of the store.

Orion stares off into the distance, thinking. He smiles, nods to himself, then exits the bar.

Amazing! Can you create a Megatron and orion scene? They are talking to to the cybertronian high council. That scene is when orion is deemed Optimus prime.

Optimusfreakingprime wrote:

ArgyleE1 wrote:

This is what I’ve got so far. I cut out a bit from the begining cause it’s irrelevant, so some of this might be a bit confusing cause it’s out of context. Let me know what you think. Btw Orion and Magnus are in a bar. This also takes place in Cybertron. Alright, here we go:

EPISODE 1, SCENE 1:


Magnus: Took you long enough.

Orion: Sorry I’m late, I was….uh……

Magnus looks at Orion suspiciously.

Orion: …..oh yea! I decided to walk this time, so it took longer than usual.

Magnus: You always walk here.

Magnus: Were you-?

Orion (interrupting Magnus): *sigh* Fine. I was at another protest.

Magnus: I have a feeling you weren’t just standing in the background.

Orion: I was the one leading the protest, so what?!

Magnus: Sooner or later you’re gonna get in some real trouble with the police. You have to be more careful.

Orion: Why worry when my best friend is a captain of the police! You’ll just back me up.

Magnus (slightly irritated): I have a duty, Orion. And that duty is to protect Cybertron and to keep the peace, even if that means arresting you.

Orion sits straight(er) up in his chair and looks off into the distance.

Magnus: Some day, you won’t have me to back you up.

Orion looks back at Magnus and leans onto the table.

Orion: Magnus, please. You’re the only friend I have. I—

Magnus (interrupting Orion): You’re not gonna have any friends if you keep this up, Orion!

Orion: I—

Magnus (angry, interrupting Orion): Good night!

Magnus stands up and walks out of the bar.

Maccadam (bartender): Tough luck, huh.

Orion (irritated): *sigh* Yep.

Maccadam: You know, a lot of people agree with you.

Orion looks over his shoulder to look at Maccadam (his back is facing Maccadam)

Orion: What?

Maccadam: You think the law is wrong. That Cybertronians should be able to choose their place of work. Right?

Orion: ….yea, why?

Maccadam: I’m just saying, more people agree with that cause then you’ll ever know.

Orion: Yea, well why aren’t they doing anything about it?!

Maccadam (speaking while pouring a drink): That’s just the thing. They’re too scared. They don’t wanna get in all that—(Maccadam puts down the liquified Energon canister)—drama.

Maccadam smiles at Orion, then drinks some of the Energon he just poured.

Orion: Then who’s gonna do it? If no one says anything, nothing will change.

Maccadam nudges his head at Orion, then walks to the back of the store.

Orion stares off into the distance, thinking. He smiles, nods to himself, then exits the bar.

Amazing! Can you create a Megatron and orion scene? They are talking to to the cybertronian high council. That scene is when orion is deemed Optimus prime.

Thanks man! Yea, I was thinking of including that in either ep 1 or 2. Btw, do you think maybe Orion could refuse the offer to become Prime, and then is deemed worthy or something later on, maybe right after the war starts? Just an idea that popped up

ArgyleE1 wrote:

Optimusfreakingprime wrote:

ArgyleE1 wrote:

This is what I’ve got so far. I cut out a bit from the begining cause it’s irrelevant, so some of this might be a bit confusing cause it’s out of context. Let me know what you think. Btw Orion and Magnus are in a bar. This also takes place in Cybertron. Alright, here we go:

EPISODE 1, SCENE 1:


Magnus: Took you long enough.

Orion: Sorry I’m late, I was….uh……

Magnus looks at Orion suspiciously.

Orion: …..oh yea! I decided to walk this time, so it took longer than usual.

Magnus: You always walk here.

Magnus: Were you-?

Orion (interrupting Magnus): *sigh* Fine. I was at another protest.

Magnus: I have a feeling you weren’t just standing in the background.

Orion: I was the one leading the protest, so what?!

Magnus: Sooner or later you’re gonna get in some real trouble with the police. You have to be more careful.

Orion: Why worry when my best friend is a captain of the police! You’ll just back me up.

Magnus (slightly irritated): I have a duty, Orion. And that duty is to protect Cybertron and to keep the peace, even if that means arresting you.

Orion sits straight(er) up in his chair and looks off into the distance.

Magnus: Some day, you won’t have me to back you up.

Orion looks back at Magnus and leans onto the table.

Orion: Magnus, please. You’re the only friend I have. I—

Magnus (interrupting Orion): You’re not gonna have any friends if you keep this up, Orion!

Orion: I—

Magnus (angry, interrupting Orion): Good night!

Magnus stands up and walks out of the bar.

Maccadam (bartender): Tough luck, huh.

Orion (irritated): *sigh* Yep.

Maccadam: You know, a lot of people agree with you.

Orion looks over his shoulder to look at Maccadam (his back is facing Maccadam)

Orion: What?

Maccadam: You think the law is wrong. That Cybertronians should be able to choose their place of work. Right?

Orion: ….yea, why?

Maccadam: I’m just saying, more people agree with that cause then you’ll ever know.

Orion: Yea, well why aren’t they doing anything about it?!

Maccadam (speaking while pouring a drink): That’s just the thing. They’re too scared. They don’t wanna get in all that—(Maccadam puts down the liquified Energon canister)—drama.

Maccadam smiles at Orion, then drinks some of the Energon he just poured.

Orion: Then who’s gonna do it? If no one says anything, nothing will change.

Maccadam nudges his head at Orion, then walks to the back of the store.

Orion stares off into the distance, thinking. He smiles, nods to himself, then exits the bar.

Amazing! Can you create a Megatron and orion scene? They are talking to to the cybertronian high council. That scene is when orion is deemed Optimus prime.

Yea, I was thinking of including that in either ep 1 or 2. Btw, do you think maybe Orion could refuse the offer to become Prime, and then is deemed worthy or something later on, maybe right after the war starts? Just an idea that popped up

Hmmm… Maybe?

Optimusfreakingprime wrote:

ArgyleE1 wrote:

Optimusfreakingprime wrote:

ArgyleE1 wrote:

This is what I’ve got so far. I cut out a bit from the begining cause it’s irrelevant, so some of this might be a bit confusing cause it’s out of context. Let me know what you think. Btw Orion and Magnus are in a bar. This also takes place in Cybertron. Alright, here we go:

EPISODE 1, SCENE 1:


Magnus: Took you long enough.

Orion: Sorry I’m late, I was….uh……

Magnus looks at Orion suspiciously.

Orion: …..oh yea! I decided to walk this time, so it took longer than usual.

Magnus: You always walk here.

Magnus: Were you-?

Orion (interrupting Magnus): *sigh* Fine. I was at another protest.

Magnus: I have a feeling you weren’t just standing in the background.

Orion: I was the one leading the protest, so what?!

Magnus: Sooner or later you’re gonna get in some real trouble with the police. You have to be more careful.

Orion: Why worry when my best friend is a captain of the police! You’ll just back me up.

Magnus (slightly irritated): I have a duty, Orion. And that duty is to protect Cybertron and to keep the peace, even if that means arresting you.

Orion sits straight(er) up in his chair and looks off into the distance.

Magnus: Some day, you won’t have me to back you up.

Orion looks back at Magnus and leans onto the table.

Orion: Magnus, please. You’re the only friend I have. I—

Magnus (interrupting Orion): You’re not gonna have any friends if you keep this up, Orion!

Orion: I—

Magnus (angry, interrupting Orion): Good night!

Magnus stands up and walks out of the bar.

Maccadam (bartender): Tough luck, huh.

Orion (irritated): *sigh* Yep.

Maccadam: You know, a lot of people agree with you.

Orion looks over his shoulder to look at Maccadam (his back is facing Maccadam)

Orion: What?

Maccadam: You think the law is wrong. That Cybertronians should be able to choose their place of work. Right?

Orion: ….yea, why?

Maccadam: I’m just saying, more people agree with that cause then you’ll ever know.

Orion: Yea, well why aren’t they doing anything about it?!

Maccadam (speaking while pouring a drink): That’s just the thing. They’re too scared. They don’t wanna get in all that—(Maccadam puts down the liquified Energon canister)—drama.

Maccadam smiles at Orion, then drinks some of the Energon he just poured.

Orion: Then who’s gonna do it? If no one says anything, nothing will change.

Maccadam nudges his head at Orion, then walks to the back of the store.

Orion stares off into the distance, thinking. He smiles, nods to himself, then exits the bar.

Amazing! Can you create a Megatron and orion scene? They are talking to to the cybertronian high council. That scene is when orion is deemed Optimus prime.

Yea, I was thinking of including that in either ep 1 or 2. Btw, do you think maybe Orion could refuse the offer to become Prime, and then is deemed worthy or something later on, maybe right after the war starts? Just an idea that popped up

Hmmm… Maybe?

You have any ideas to contribute?

Well, Orion turn down the role but the council remains firm. Hearing this Megatron gets angered and leaves orion. Orion is disappointed and arranges a meeting with Megatron. Later during the early stages of the war, Orion enters the core of Cybertron in hopes to save Cybertron. Primus says that Orion can't do anything about it and gives Orion the matrix that contains a piece of the allspark.

Optimusfreakingprime wrote:

Well, Orion turn down the role but the council remains firm. Hearing this Megatron gets angered and leaves orion. Orion is disappointed and arranges a meeting with Megatron. Later during the early stages of the war, Orion enters the core of Cybertron in hopes to save Cybertron. Primus says that Orion can't do anything about it and gives Orion the matrix that contains a piece of the allspark.

MY EARLY DRAFTS (THAT, NOTE, WERE MADE, LIKE, LAST YEAR) HAD ORION GO TO THE CORE OF CYBERTRON AND GAIN THE MATRIX AND TURN INTO OPTIMUS. HOW DID YOU KNOW?!

ArgyleE1 wrote:

Optimusfreakingprime wrote:

Well, Orion turn down the role but the council remains firm. Hearing this Megatron gets angered and leaves orion. Orion is disappointed and arranges a meeting with Megatron. Later during the early stages of the war, Orion enters the core of Cybertron in hopes to save Cybertron. Primus says that Orion can't do anything about it and gives Orion the matrix that contains a piece of the allspark.

MY EARLY DRAFTS (THAT, NOTE, WERE MADE, LIKE, LAST YEAR) HAD ORION GO TO THE CORE OF CYBERTRON AND GAIN THE MATRIX AND TURN INTO OPTIMUS. HOW DID YOU KNOW?!

I got the touch. And the power.

Optimusfreakingprime wrote:

ArgyleE1 wrote:

Optimusfreakingprime wrote:

Well, Orion turn down the role but the council remains firm. Hearing this Megatron gets angered and leaves orion. Orion is disappointed and arranges a meeting with Megatron. Later during the early stages of the war, Orion enters the core of Cybertron in hopes to save Cybertron. Primus says that Orion can't do anything about it and gives Orion the matrix that contains a piece of the allspark.

MY EARLY DRAFTS (THAT, NOTE, WERE MADE, LIKE, LAST YEAR) HAD ORION GO TO THE CORE OF CYBERTRON AND GAIN THE MATRIX AND TURN INTO OPTIMUS. HOW DID YOU KNOW?!

I got the touch. And the power.

YOU’VE GOT THE TOUCH. NANA. NA. NA. YOU’VE GOT THE POOOOOWWWERRRRRRRR. YEA.

ArgyleE1 wrote:

Optimusfreakingprime wrote:

ArgyleE1 wrote:

Optimusfreakingprime wrote:

Well, Orion turn down the role but the council remains firm. Hearing this Megatron gets angered and leaves orion. Orion is disappointed and arranges a meeting with Megatron. Later during the early stages of the war, Orion enters the core of Cybertron in hopes to save Cybertron. Primus says that Orion can't do anything about it and gives Orion the matrix that contains a piece of the allspark.

MY EARLY DRAFTS (THAT, NOTE, WERE MADE, LIKE, LAST YEAR) HAD ORION GO TO THE CORE OF CYBERTRON AND GAIN THE MATRIX AND TURN INTO OPTIMUS. HOW DID YOU KNOW?!

I got the touch. And the power.

YOU’VE GOT THE TOUCH. NANA. NA. NA. YOU’VE GOT THE POOOOOWWWERRRRRRRR. YEA.

Can you start writing the part I asked you too? Sorry if that sounds mean.

Optimusfreakingprime wrote:

ArgyleE1 wrote:

Optimusfreakingprime wrote:

ArgyleE1 wrote:

Optimusfreakingprime wrote:

Well, Orion turn down the role but the council remains firm. Hearing this Megatron gets angered and leaves orion. Orion is disappointed and arranges a meeting with Megatron. Later during the early stages of the war, Orion enters the core of Cybertron in hopes to save Cybertron. Primus says that Orion can't do anything about it and gives Orion the matrix that contains a piece of the allspark.

MY EARLY DRAFTS (THAT, NOTE, WERE MADE, LIKE, LAST YEAR) HAD ORION GO TO THE CORE OF CYBERTRON AND GAIN THE MATRIX AND TURN INTO OPTIMUS. HOW DID YOU KNOW?!

I got the touch. And the power.

YOU’VE GOT THE TOUCH. NANA. NA. NA. YOU’VE GOT THE POOOOOWWWERRRRRRRR. YEA.

Can you start writing the part I asked you too? Sorry if that sounds mean.

Yea. No, it doesn’t man. Don’t worry. I’m on it.

Just making sure, do you mean when Optimus and Megatron go to the high council, then the offer, than Megatron gets mad, and all that?

ArgyleE1 wrote:

Optimusfreakingprime wrote:

ArgyleE1 wrote:

Optimusfreakingprime wrote:

ArgyleE1 wrote:

Optimusfreakingprime wrote:

Well, Orion turn down the role but the council remains firm. Hearing this Megatron gets angered and leaves orion. Orion is disappointed and arranges a meeting with Megatron. Later during the early stages of the war, Orion enters the core of Cybertron in hopes to save Cybertron. Primus says that Orion can't do anything about it and gives Orion the matrix that contains a piece of the allspark.

MY EARLY DRAFTS (THAT, NOTE, WERE MADE, LIKE, LAST YEAR) HAD ORION GO TO THE CORE OF CYBERTRON AND GAIN THE MATRIX AND TURN INTO OPTIMUS. HOW DID YOU KNOW?!

I got the touch. And the power.

YOU’VE GOT THE TOUCH. NANA. NA. NA. YOU’VE GOT THE POOOOOWWWERRRRRRRR. YEA.

Can you start writing the part I asked you too? Sorry if that sounds mean.

Yea. No, it doesn’t man. Don’t worry. I’m on it.

Just making sure, do you mean when Optimus and Megatron go to the high council, then the offer, than Megatron gets mad, and all that?

yes

Optimusfreakingprime wrote:

ArgyleE1 wrote:

Optimusfreakingprime wrote:

R u done?

Optimusfreakingprime wrote:

ArgyleE1 wrote:

Optimusfreakingprime wrote:

R u done?

With the script part? Nope. Haven’t even started it. Cause I just got home from school. I’m about to start it.

ArgyleE1 wrote:

Optimusfreakingprime wrote:

ArgyleE1 wrote:

Optimusfreakingprime wrote:

R u done?

With the script part? Nope. Haven’t even started it. Cause I just got home from school. I’m about to start it.

It is currently being worked on. I’m just warning you, that whole part is probably going to take up 3-5 scenes, so it’s gonna take a while to write.

Optimusfreakingprime wrote:

ArgyleE1 wrote:

This is what I’ve got so far. I cut out a bit from the begining cause it’s irrelevant, so some of this might be a bit confusing cause it’s out of context. Let me know what you think. Btw Orion and Magnus are in a bar. This also takes place in Cybertron. Alright, here we go:

EPISODE 1, SCENE 1:


Magnus: Took you long enough.

Orion: Sorry I’m late, I was….uh……

Magnus looks at Orion suspiciously.

Orion: …..oh yea! I decided to walk this time, so it took longer than usual.

Magnus: You always walk here.

Magnus: Were you-?

Orion (interrupting Magnus): *sigh* Fine. I was at another protest.

Magnus: I have a feeling you weren’t just standing in the background.

Orion: I was the one leading the protest, so what?!

Magnus: Sooner or later you’re gonna get in some real trouble with the police. You have to be more careful.

Orion: Why worry when my best friend is a captain of the police! You’ll just back me up.

Magnus (slightly irritated): I have a duty, Orion. And that duty is to protect Cybertron and to keep the peace, even if that means arresting you.

Orion sits straight(er) up in his chair and looks off into the distance.

Magnus: Some day, you won’t have me to back you up.

Orion looks back at Magnus and leans onto the table.

Orion: Magnus, please. You’re the only friend I have. I—

Magnus (interrupting Orion): You’re not gonna have any friends if you keep this up, Orion!

Orion: I—

Magnus (angry, interrupting Orion): Good night!

Magnus stands up and walks out of the bar.

Maccadam (bartender): Tough luck, huh.

Orion (irritated): *sigh* Yep.

Maccadam: You know, a lot of people agree with you.

Orion looks over his shoulder to look at Maccadam (his back is facing Maccadam)

Orion: What?

Maccadam: You think the law is wrong. That Cybertronians should be able to choose their place of work. Right?

Orion: ….yea, why?

Maccadam: I’m just saying, more people agree with that cause then you’ll ever know.

Orion: Yea, well why aren’t they doing anything about it?!

Maccadam (speaking while pouring a drink): That’s just the thing. They’re too scared. They don’t wanna get in all that—(Maccadam puts down the liquified Energon canister)—drama.

Maccadam smiles at Orion, then drinks some of the Energon he just poured.

Orion: Then who’s gonna do it? If no one says anything, nothing will change.

Maccadam nudges his head at Orion, then walks to the back of the store.

Orion stares off into the distance, thinking. He smiles, nods to himself, then exits the bar.

Amazing! Can you create a Megatron and orion scene? They are talking to to the cybertronian high council. That scene is when orion is deemed Optimus prime.

So, the council offers to make Orion prime, and Orion refuses. I get that part. But, are Orion and Megatron able to change the council’s mind about the law they’re debating about, or no?

ArgyleE1 wrote:

Optimusfreakingprime wrote:

ArgyleE1 wrote:

This is what I’ve got so far. I cut out a bit from the begining cause it’s irrelevant, so some of this might be a bit confusing cause it’s out of context. Let me know what you think. Btw Orion and Magnus are in a bar. This also takes place in Cybertron. Alright, here we go:

EPISODE 1, SCENE 1:


Magnus: Took you long enough.

Orion: Sorry I’m late, I was….uh……

Magnus looks at Orion suspiciously.

Orion: …..oh yea! I decided to walk this time, so it took longer than usual.

Magnus: You always walk here.

Magnus: Were you-?

Orion (interrupting Magnus): *sigh* Fine. I was at another protest.

Magnus: I have a feeling you weren’t just standing in the background.

Orion: I was the one leading the protest, so what?!

Magnus: Sooner or later you’re gonna get in some real trouble with the police. You have to be more careful.

Orion: Why worry when my best friend is a captain of the police! You’ll just back me up.

Magnus (slightly irritated): I have a duty, Orion. And that duty is to protect Cybertron and to keep the peace, even if that means arresting you.

Orion sits straight(er) up in his chair and looks off into the distance.

Magnus: Some day, you won’t have me to back you up.

Orion looks back at Magnus and leans onto the table.

Orion: Magnus, please. You’re the only friend I have. I—

Magnus (interrupting Orion): You’re not gonna have any friends if you keep this up, Orion!

Orion: I—

Magnus (angry, interrupting Orion): Good night!

Magnus stands up and walks out of the bar.

Maccadam (bartender): Tough luck, huh.

Orion (irritated): *sigh* Yep.

Maccadam: You know, a lot of people agree with you.

Orion looks over his shoulder to look at Maccadam (his back is facing Maccadam)

Orion: What?

Maccadam: You think the law is wrong. That Cybertronians should be able to choose their place of work. Right?

Orion: ….yea, why?

Maccadam: I’m just saying, more people agree with that cause then you’ll ever know.

Orion: Yea, well why aren’t they doing anything about it?!

Maccadam (speaking while pouring a drink): That’s just the thing. They’re too scared. They don’t wanna get in all that—(Maccadam puts down the liquified Energon canister)—drama.

Maccadam smiles at Orion, then drinks some of the Energon he just poured.

Orion: Then who’s gonna do it? If no one says anything, nothing will change.

Maccadam nudges his head at Orion, then walks to the back of the store.

Orion stares off into the distance, thinking. He smiles, nods to himself, then exits the bar.

Amazing! Can you create a Megatron and orion scene? They are talking to to the cybertronian high council. That scene is when orion is deemed Optimus prime.

So, the council offers to make Orion prime, and Orion refuses. I get that part. But, are Orion and Megatron able to change the council’s mind about the law they’re debating about, or no?

Yes. Sorry for not responding. I'm watching trf rotb

Optimusfreakingprime wrote:

ArgyleE1 wrote:

Optimusfreakingprime wrote:

ArgyleE1 wrote:

This is what I’ve got so far. I cut out a bit from the begining cause it’s irrelevant, so some of this might be a bit confusing cause it’s out of context. Let me know what you think. Btw Orion and Magnus are in a bar. This also takes place in Cybertron. Alright, here we go:

EPISODE 1, SCENE 1:


Magnus: Took you long enough.

Orion: Sorry I’m late, I was….uh……

Magnus looks at Orion suspiciously.

Orion: …..oh yea! I decided to walk this time, so it took longer than usual.

Magnus: You always walk here.

Magnus: Were you-?

Orion (interrupting Magnus): *sigh* Fine. I was at another protest.

Magnus: I have a feeling you weren’t just standing in the background.

Orion: I was the one leading the protest, so what?!

Magnus: Sooner or later you’re gonna get in some real trouble with the police. You have to be more careful.

Orion: Why worry when my best friend is a captain of the police! You’ll just back me up.

Magnus (slightly irritated): I have a duty, Orion. And that duty is to protect Cybertron and to keep the peace, even if that means arresting you.

Orion sits straight(er) up in his chair and looks off into the distance.

Magnus: Some day, you won’t have me to back you up.

Orion looks back at Magnus and leans onto the table.

Orion: Magnus, please. You’re the only friend I have. I—

Magnus (interrupting Orion): You’re not gonna have any friends if you keep this up, Orion!

Orion: I—

Magnus (angry, interrupting Orion): Good night!

Magnus stands up and walks out of the bar.

Maccadam (bartender): Tough luck, huh.

Orion (irritated): *sigh* Yep.

Maccadam: You know, a lot of people agree with you.

Orion looks over his shoulder to look at Maccadam (his back is facing Maccadam)

Orion: What?

Maccadam: You think the law is wrong. That Cybertronians should be able to choose their place of work. Right?

Orion: ….yea, why?

Maccadam: I’m just saying, more people agree with that cause then you’ll ever know.

Orion: Yea, well why aren’t they doing anything about it?!

Maccadam (speaking while pouring a drink): That’s just the thing. They’re too scared. They don’t wanna get in all that—(Maccadam puts down the liquified Energon canister)—drama.

Maccadam smiles at Orion, then drinks some of the Energon he just poured.

Orion: Then who’s gonna do it? If no one says anything, nothing will change.

Maccadam nudges his head at Orion, then walks to the back of the store.

Orion stares off into the distance, thinking. He smiles, nods to himself, then exits the bar.

Amazing! Can you create a Megatron and orion scene? They are talking to to the cybertronian high council. That scene is when orion is deemed Optimus prime.

So, the council offers to make Orion prime, and Orion refuses. I get that part. But, are Orion and Megatron able to change the council’s mind about the law they’re debating about, or no?

Yes. Sorry for not responding. I'm watching trf rotb

It’s fine man. I’m sorry for putting pressure on you and for being so impatient.

ArgyleE1 wrote:

Optimusfreakingprime wrote:

ArgyleE1 wrote:

Optimusfreakingprime wrote:

ArgyleE1 wrote:

This is what I’ve got so far. I cut out a bit from the begining cause it’s irrelevant, so some of this might be a bit confusing cause it’s out of context. Let me know what you think. Btw Orion and Magnus are in a bar. This also takes place in Cybertron. Alright, here we go:

EPISODE 1, SCENE 1:


Magnus: Took you long enough.

Orion: Sorry I’m late, I was….uh……

Magnus looks at Orion suspiciously.

Orion: …..oh yea! I decided to walk this time, so it took longer than usual.

Magnus: You always walk here.

Magnus: Were you-?

Orion (interrupting Magnus): *sigh* Fine. I was at another protest.

Magnus: I have a feeling you weren’t just standing in the background.

Orion: I was the one leading the protest, so what?!

Magnus: Sooner or later you’re gonna get in some real trouble with the police. You have to be more careful.

Orion: Why worry when my best friend is a captain of the police! You’ll just back me up.

Magnus (slightly irritated): I have a duty, Orion. And that duty is to protect Cybertron and to keep the peace, even if that means arresting you.

Orion sits straight(er) up in his chair and looks off into the distance.

Magnus: Some day, you won’t have me to back you up.

Orion looks back at Magnus and leans onto the table.

Orion: Magnus, please. You’re the only friend I have. I—

Magnus (interrupting Orion): You’re not gonna have any friends if you keep this up, Orion!

Orion: I—

Magnus (angry, interrupting Orion): Good night!

Magnus stands up and walks out of the bar.

Maccadam (bartender): Tough luck, huh.

Orion (irritated): *sigh* Yep.

Maccadam: You know, a lot of people agree with you.

Orion looks over his shoulder to look at Maccadam (his back is facing Maccadam)

Orion: What?

Maccadam: You think the law is wrong. That Cybertronians should be able to choose their place of work. Right?

Orion: ….yea, why?

Maccadam: I’m just saying, more people agree with that cause then you’ll ever know.

Orion: Yea, well why aren’t they doing anything about it?!

Maccadam (speaking while pouring a drink): That’s just the thing. They’re too scared. They don’t wanna get in all that—(Maccadam puts down the liquified Energon canister)—drama.

Maccadam smiles at Orion, then drinks some of the Energon he just poured.

Orion: Then who’s gonna do it? If no one says anything, nothing will change.

Maccadam nudges his head at Orion, then walks to the back of the store.

Orion stares off into the distance, thinking. He smiles, nods to himself, then exits the bar.

Amazing! Can you create a Megatron and orion scene? They are talking to to the cybertronian high council. That scene is when orion is deemed Optimus prime.

So, the council offers to make Orion prime, and Orion refuses. I get that part. But, are Orion and Megatron able to change the council’s mind about the law they’re debating about, or no?

Yes. Sorry for not responding. I'm watching trf rotb

It’s fine man. I’m sorry for putting pressure on you and for being so impatient.

No, its fine. I want the script done too. Once you are done tell me.

Optimusfreakingprime wrote:

ArgyleE1 wrote:

Optimusfreakingprime wrote:

ArgyleE1 wrote:

Optimusfreakingprime wrote:

ArgyleE1 wrote:

This is what I’ve got so far. I cut out a bit from the begining cause it’s irrelevant, so some of this might be a bit confusing cause it’s out of context. Let me know what you think. Btw Orion and Magnus are in a bar. This also takes place in Cybertron. Alright, here we go:

EPISODE 1, SCENE 1:


Magnus: Took you long enough.

Orion: Sorry I’m late, I was….uh……

Magnus looks at Orion suspiciously.

Orion: …..oh yea! I decided to walk this time, so it took longer than usual.

Magnus: You always walk here.

Magnus: Were you-?

Orion (interrupting Magnus): *sigh* Fine. I was at another protest.

Magnus: I have a feeling you weren’t just standing in the background.

Orion: I was the one leading the protest, so what?!

Magnus: Sooner or later you’re gonna get in some real trouble with the police. You have to be more careful.

Orion: Why worry when my best friend is a captain of the police! You’ll just back me up.

Magnus (slightly irritated): I have a duty, Orion. And that duty is to protect Cybertron and to keep the peace, even if that means arresting you.

Orion sits straight(er) up in his chair and looks off into the distance.

Magnus: Some day, you won’t have me to back you up.

Orion looks back at Magnus and leans onto the table.

Orion: Magnus, please. You’re the only friend I have. I—

Magnus (interrupting Orion): You’re not gonna have any friends if you keep this up, Orion!

Orion: I—

Magnus (angry, interrupting Orion): Good night!

Magnus stands up and walks out of the bar.

Maccadam (bartender): Tough luck, huh.

Orion (irritated): *sigh* Yep.

Maccadam: You know, a lot of people agree with you.

Orion looks over his shoulder to look at Maccadam (his back is facing Maccadam)

Orion: What?

Maccadam: You think the law is wrong. That Cybertronians should be able to choose their place of work. Right?

Orion: ….yea, why?

Maccadam: I’m just saying, more people agree with that cause then you’ll ever know.

Orion: Yea, well why aren’t they doing anything about it?!

Maccadam (speaking while pouring a drink): That’s just the thing. They’re too scared. They don’t wanna get in all that—(Maccadam puts down the liquified Energon canister)—drama.

Maccadam smiles at Orion, then drinks some of the Energon he just poured.

Orion: Then who’s gonna do it? If no one says anything, nothing will change.

Maccadam nudges his head at Orion, then walks to the back of the store.

Orion stares off into the distance, thinking. He smiles, nods to himself, then exits the bar.

Amazing! Can you create a Megatron and orion scene? They are talking to to the cybertronian high council. That scene is when orion is deemed Optimus prime.

So, the council offers to make Orion prime, and Orion refuses. I get that part. But, are Orion and Megatron able to change the council’s mind about the law they’re debating about, or no?

Yes. Sorry for not responding. I'm watching trf rotb

It’s fine man. I’m sorry for putting pressure on you and for being so impatient.

No, its fine. I want the script done too. Once you are done tell me.

Okay. Today I’m taking a break from scratch for a while. I don’t know if it’ll be for the rest if the day, or just a few hours. But I just want some time off of technology, so I’m working on a Lego project. That being said, is it okay if I don’t work on the script today?

ArgyleE1 wrote:

Optimusfreakingprime wrote:

ArgyleE1 wrote:

Optimusfreakingprime wrote:

ArgyleE1 wrote:

Optimusfreakingprime wrote:

ArgyleE1 wrote:

This is what I’ve got so far. I cut out a bit from the begining cause it’s irrelevant, so some of this might be a bit confusing cause it’s out of context. Let me know what you think. Btw Orion and Magnus are in a bar. This also takes place in Cybertron. Alright, here we go:

EPISODE 1, SCENE 1:


Magnus: Took you long enough.

Orion: Sorry I’m late, I was….uh……

Magnus looks at Orion suspiciously.

Orion: …..oh yea! I decided to walk this time, so it took longer than usual.

Magnus: You always walk here.

Magnus: Were you-?

Orion (interrupting Magnus): *sigh* Fine. I was at another protest.

Magnus: I have a feeling you weren’t just standing in the background.

Orion: I was the one leading the protest, so what?!

Magnus: Sooner or later you’re gonna get in some real trouble with the police. You have to be more careful.

Orion: Why worry when my best friend is a captain of the police! You’ll just back me up.

Magnus (slightly irritated): I have a duty, Orion. And that duty is to protect Cybertron and to keep the peace, even if that means arresting you.

Orion sits straight(er) up in his chair and looks off into the distance.

Magnus: Some day, you won’t have me to back you up.

Orion looks back at Magnus and leans onto the table.

Orion: Magnus, please. You’re the only friend I have. I—

Magnus (interrupting Orion): You’re not gonna have any friends if you keep this up, Orion!

Orion: I—

Magnus (angry, interrupting Orion): Good night!

Magnus stands up and walks out of the bar.

Maccadam (bartender): Tough luck, huh.

Orion (irritated): *sigh* Yep.

Maccadam: You know, a lot of people agree with you.

Orion looks over his shoulder to look at Maccadam (his back is facing Maccadam)

Orion: What?

Maccadam: You think the law is wrong. That Cybertronians should be able to choose their place of work. Right?

Orion: ….yea, why?

Maccadam: I’m just saying, more people agree with that cause then you’ll ever know.

Orion: Yea, well why aren’t they doing anything about it?!

Maccadam (speaking while pouring a drink): That’s just the thing. They’re too scared. They don’t wanna get in all that—(Maccadam puts down the liquified Energon canister)—drama.

Maccadam smiles at Orion, then drinks some of the Energon he just poured.

Orion: Then who’s gonna do it? If no one says anything, nothing will change.

Maccadam nudges his head at Orion, then walks to the back of the store.

Orion stares off into the distance, thinking. He smiles, nods to himself, then exits the bar.

Amazing! Can you create a Megatron and orion scene? They are talking to to the cybertronian high council. That scene is when orion is deemed Optimus prime.

So, the council offers to make Orion prime, and Orion refuses. I get that part. But, are Orion and Megatron able to change the council’s mind about the law they’re debating about, or no?

Yes. Sorry for not responding. I'm watching trf rotb

It’s fine man. I’m sorry for putting pressure on you and for being so impatient.

No, its fine. I want the script done too. Once you are done tell me.

Okay. Today I’m taking a break from scratch for a while. I don’t know if it’ll be for the rest if the day, or just a few hours. But I just want some time off of technology, so I’m working on a Lego project. That being said, is it okay if I don’t work on the script today?

I also have a headache, so that’s part of it