Optimusfreakingprime wrote:
ArgyleE1 wrote:
This is what I’ve got so far. I cut out a bit from the begining cause it’s irrelevant, so some of this might be a bit confusing cause it’s out of context. Let me know what you think. Btw Orion and Magnus are in a bar. This also takes place in Cybertron. Alright, here we go:

EPISODE 1, SCENE 1:

Magnus: Took you long enough.

Orion: Sorry I’m late, I was….uh……

Magnus looks at Orion suspiciously.

Orion: …..oh yea! I decided to walk this time, so it took longer than usual.

Magnus: You always walk here.

Magnus: Were you-?

Orion (interrupting Magnus): *sigh* Fine. I was at another protest.

Magnus: I have a feeling you weren’t just standing in the background.

Orion: I was the one leading the protest, so what?!

Magnus: Sooner or later you’re gonna get in some real trouble with the police. You have to be more careful.

Orion: Why worry when my best friend is a captain of the police! You’ll just back me up.

Magnus (slightly irritated): I have a duty, Orion. And that duty is to protect Cybertron and to keep the peace, even if that means arresting you.

Orion sits straight(er) up in his chair and looks off into the distance.

Magnus: Some day, you won’t have me to back you up.

Orion looks back at Magnus and leans onto the table.

Orion: Magnus, please. You’re the only friend I have. I—

Magnus (interrupting Orion): You’re not gonna have any friends if you keep this up, Orion!

Orion: I—

Magnus (angry, interrupting Orion): Good night!

Magnus stands up and walks out of the bar.

Maccadam (bartender): Tough luck, huh.

Orion (irritated): *sigh* Yep.

Maccadam: You know, a lot of people agree with you.

Orion looks over his shoulder to look at Maccadam (his back is facing Maccadam)

Orion: What?

Maccadam: You think the law is wrong. That Cybertronians should be able to choose their place of work. Right?

Orion: ….yea, why?

Maccadam: I’m just saying, more people agree with that cause then you’ll ever know.

Orion: Yea, well why aren’t they doing anything about it?!

Maccadam (speaking while pouring a drink): That’s just the thing. They’re too scared. They don’t wanna get in all that—(Maccadam puts down the liquified Energon canister)—drama.

Maccadam smiles at Orion, then drinks some of the Energon he just poured.

Orion: Then who’s gonna do it? If no one says anything, nothing will change.

Maccadam nudges his head at Orion, then walks to the back of the store.

Orion stares off into the distance, thinking. He smiles, nods to himself, then exits the bar.

Amazing! Can you create a Megatron and orion scene? They are talking to to the cybertronian high council. That scene is when orion is deemed Optimus prime.

Thanks man! Yea, I was thinking of including that in either ep 1 or 2. Btw, do you think maybe Orion could refuse the offer to become Prime, and then is deemed worthy or something later on, maybe right after the war starts? Just an idea that popped up