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One is a like button, one is a favorite button. The like button is meant to represent that you enjoyed the project, while the favorite is meant to showcase the project on your profile towards others. Its the difference between saying “I like your hat” and putting a “I like your hat” bumper sticker on your car.
Ok I have an idea thats original (sort of), look ujp El Grand Maja, could we use it as a boss of an underwater world?

Angelita_MMelody1015 wrote:

SafGold1234 wrote:

Hi!
This is an incredible studio by me! It would be very much appreciated if you featured it.

Link: Monday 19 August 2024

It has a:

~Specific theme
~Fun facts
~Nice thumbnail
~Informative description
~Good amount of curators
~One manager to start

Please consider featuring this! If not now, maybe near Monday 19 August 2024, as that is National Aviation Day!

Thank you ST!

SafGold1234 || helper || curator || reading books || exploring nature || having fun || exploring the world and being friends with you!
I think you missed the link



They meant it's coming on Monday 19 august read it again
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ABC124816 wrote:

I made a non-Euclidean maze in this! My second level. See if you figure out how this non-Euclidean maze is implemented (non-Euclidean geometry is something I know about far more than most on this thread.)
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ik a little bit of non-eucldian geometry, but I don't quite see how this is it. Is it cause some pathways are blocked
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Fluffygamer_ wrote:

kpoovakan wrote:

Fluffygamer_ wrote:

kpoovakan wrote:

(#1787)

PhirripSyrrip wrote:

Cloud data gets broken for me when projects are copied.

Recently I copied a few projects and shared them, unsharing the originals in order to change the thumbnails of the projects. The copied versions kept the same numbers as the original project. But when you changed the value of the variables, they would change, but not in the cloud- they acted as normal variables instead of cloud variables. In the cloud data log, it just said that there was no cloud data or something like that.

To solve this, I deleted all the variables and recreated them again. This worked. I'm using Chrome on Windows 8.
this happens for me- but in a new project and deleting variables then creating them again doesn't actually work.
any advice?
try renaming them ?
I can probably try, although I don't see how that would help (and it would be a little annoying to have to test and retest every single time)
Well it's what worked for almost everyone
alright, thanks, I'll see if it works
Seriously though, why do we need two? Having both “love” and “favorite” features is super confusing and unnecessary (and after reading the rejected suggestions forum page, I know ST really hates confusion lol) also just as a side note why is it called a favorite in the first place? Is something as simple as a “like” so forbidden? I know this sounds like more of a rant than a suggestion (even though it kinda is lol) but it’s not like I hate scratch’s like system, it just a little confusing. And if you’re still not convinced, I got one last thing for you. Which is that most people give both on a project they like, which is harmless at first. Unless your project blows up and then you get like 20-50 messages that are just favorites and that’s such a PAIN to sort through. Anyway, I’ve gone on for far too long, so I’ll stop it here.

kpoovakan wrote:

Fluffygamer_ wrote:

kpoovakan wrote:

(#1787)

PhirripSyrrip wrote:

Cloud data gets broken for me when projects are copied.

Recently I copied a few projects and shared them, unsharing the originals in order to change the thumbnails of the projects. The copied versions kept the same numbers as the original project. But when you changed the value of the variables, they would change, but not in the cloud- they acted as normal variables instead of cloud variables. In the cloud data log, it just said that there was no cloud data or something like that.

To solve this, I deleted all the variables and recreated them again. This worked. I'm using Chrome on Windows 8.
this happens for me- but in a new project and deleting variables then creating them again doesn't actually work.
any advice?
try renaming them ?
I can probably try, although I don't see how that would help (and it would be a little annoying to have to test and retest every single time)
Well it's what worked for almost everyone
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Maybe a year and a half to two years back, I released my best game on Scratch yet called Shump ‘N’ Bump. As you would expect, it's a SHUMP where you try to survive for as long as you can by defending yourself from hordes of zombies! I've just revisited it to fix some bugs, so now that it's all polished up I'd like for you to try it and tell me what you think! Please give me some advice on how I can update it and make it better in the future!

Here's the game:
https://scratch.mit.edu/projects/689579905/

Have fun!
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Fluffygamer_ wrote:

kpoovakan wrote:

(#1787)

PhirripSyrrip wrote:

Cloud data gets broken for me when projects are copied.

Recently I copied a few projects and shared them, unsharing the originals in order to change the thumbnails of the projects. The copied versions kept the same numbers as the original project. But when you changed the value of the variables, they would change, but not in the cloud- they acted as normal variables instead of cloud variables. In the cloud data log, it just said that there was no cloud data or something like that.

To solve this, I deleted all the variables and recreated them again. This worked. I'm using Chrome on Windows 8.
this happens for me- but in a new project and deleting variables then creating them again doesn't actually work.
any advice?
try renaming them ?
I can probably try, although I don't see how that would help (and it would be a little annoying to have to test and retest every single time)

depresso-boiyo wrote:

-snip ‘cause I’m a clean freak -
(Also to the two people who said u dont support, have you guys not known i was trans this whole time or smth)
Kingsnipe.

No, I have. Just because I don't support the community and may be against it doesn't mean that I'll block you out or treat you like garbage. You're human. I'm human. We all have the opportunity to do or do not and time enough to do either. Besides, if I were trying to avoid all LGBTQIA+ members, goodbye life! My coworkers, acquaintances, boss, employees, friends, etc, etc- they all have the possibility (and in this day and age probability) of being a member of the community.

Really drawn-out and winded answer, I guess, but there you go.

kpoovakan wrote:

(#1787)

PhirripSyrrip wrote:

Cloud data gets broken for me when projects are copied.

Recently I copied a few projects and shared them, unsharing the originals in order to change the thumbnails of the projects. The copied versions kept the same numbers as the original project. But when you changed the value of the variables, they would change, but not in the cloud- they acted as normal variables instead of cloud variables. In the cloud data log, it just said that there was no cloud data or something like that.

To solve this, I deleted all the variables and recreated them again. This worked. I'm using Chrome on Windows 8.
this happens for me- but in a new project and deleting variables then creating them again doesn't actually work.
any advice?
try renaming them ?

SafGold1234 wrote:

Hi!
This is an incredible studio by me! It would be very much appreciated if you featured it.

Link: Monday 19 August 2024

It has a:

~Specific theme
~Fun facts
~Nice thumbnail
~Informative description
~Good amount of curators
~One manager to start

Please consider featuring this! If not now, maybe near Monday 19 August 2024, as that is National Aviation Day!

Thank you ST!

SafGold1234 || helper || curator || reading books || exploring nature || having fun || exploring the world and being friends with you!
I think you missed the link
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depresso-boiyo wrote:

DewMcStew wrote:

Lol. I am quite a bit older than the average Scratch demographic though haha
Same. Im 18.
I'm eleven ;-;

kingKASEtheGREATalt wrote:

MiddleSchoolMaddness wrote:

Thank you very much, This helped a whole bunch!
your welcome!

https://scratch.mit.edu/projects/990656020 here's my first sprite's result.
Well, you could make a line sprite, with the left end in the center of the editor. You could then use “point towards mouse pointer” and “size” to line things up.
Hope this at least helps a little bit.
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My order
-Username: _WOFDOG_
-What you want done: Voice acting for my animation
-Describe in detail: acting me and Thee-drag0n (surprise - don’t tell him)
-Preferred Deadline (min 4 days): BEFORE APRIL 1ST PLEASE THIS IS FOR A COMPETITION
-Preferred Worker: don’t care just give it to someone who will get it done quickly but can also do the requirements (read it all before picking)
-Where should we contact you? my profile
-Are you following the shop topic? No. (That is because I don’t want all those messages)
-Have you read our rules and read the front page? Yes, I have.
-Other info:

Voices: (please try I know it probaly won’t be perfect)
Berry: kind, male, happy
Dragon: same thing but a little more fierce

Lines: (EACH LINE AS A SEPARATE SOUND)
Berry (me): Just gonna go for a nice little stroll in the woods…
Berry: Oh, hi Dragon!
Dragon (Thee-drag0n): Hello.
Berry: I’m just going for a walk.
Dragon: Behind you! A UFO!
Berry: I know your tricks. There’s no UFO.
Berry: *screams*
Berry: Goodness, that was a crazy dream!

Random question:
Why do people make and follow accounts like burger? They are just inactive accounts.

Edit:
I now see that you need staff, I might join if I get good products

Another Edit
I updated the lines
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PhirripSyrrip wrote:

Cloud data gets broken for me when projects are copied.

Recently I copied a few projects and shared them, unsharing the originals in order to change the thumbnails of the projects. The copied versions kept the same numbers as the original project. But when you changed the value of the variables, they would change, but not in the cloud- they acted as normal variables instead of cloud variables. In the cloud data log, it just said that there was no cloud data or something like that.

To solve this, I deleted all the variables and recreated them again. This worked. I'm using Chrome on Windows 8.
this happens for me- but in a new project and deleting variables then creating them again doesn't actually work.
any advice?
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Yeah, jvvg pretty much answered it. I'd like to add that this starting a flame war is a bit of a stretch. I do remember when I was ten and someone said they were reporting my post to be closed and I was crying about it because I thought I would get in trouble.
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I swear I will follow all of the scratch community guidelines and I will make sure whoever proposes a project, that it isn’t their project but somebody else’s and I will test their project out to make sure that it follows the community guidelines and how good of a quality game it is and if I add it, I will respond to them with a friendly response to let them know!
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VideoGameResearcher wrote:

co0lcr34t10ns wrote:

VideoGameResearcher wrote:

Hello.

I am trying to find the oldest Scratch projects related to a game called ROBLOX, but there is no way to sort them. With there being hundreds of results, there's no way that I can find what I'm looking for. Especially when you have to go to a project in order to see what date it was created.

I tried using Google's “site:” and “before:” fields to search that way, but I was given inaccurate results that didn't match the date I specified.

It would be helpful if there was a way to do this somehow, like with the Scratch API. I looked over it a bit and didn't see anything that could help, but perhaps I overlooked something? I checked other threads and didn't find an answer besides a reply from someone who said they couldn't say (which isn't very helpful).

It's weird to think about how limited the search feature is for a site that has been hosting tens of thousands of projects made by users over the years. I hope there's a way to get around this!
I'm not sure, but if you know python, maybe scratchattach would work. IDK though

I don't know much about Python, unfortunately.
Then unfortunately the answer to your question is no, there isn't.
"Everybody is a crystal slipper,
once it shatters,
no one will wear it.
It will never be the same,
no matter what you do.

—–

A Bejeweled Fairytale❞ | Lovebirdkit App

—–

Once upon a time there was a castle,
in the castle was a princess,
The fairest in the land.
She was the perfect crystal slipper
She was pretty
She was Smart
Oh so Kind
Compassionate
Everyone loved her
and she loved everyone.
She was Perfect.
she was so perfect
it seemed she came
from a fairy tale.
She lived happily ever after
She had the perfect life.
Her name was Lovebird

And

She

Is

A


Liar


And

Her

fairy tale

was

bejeweled

She was never the perfect slipper
She wanted to be.
but She was imperfect
All she ever wanted was to be loved
But all too soon her slipper shattered
She changed
She was never the same
All she craved love
K!ll for some attention
And she wasn't scared to shatter a few hearts
To get what she wanted.

Ideas <3 (No stealing!)

Perfect
Obsesses over her look
Bottles up their emotions
constantly feeling like they should be perfect
easily embarrassed
never admits they are wrong
Wants to make aspenfaith proud
Feels like they always have to fit somebodies picture of perfect.
Always grooming themself
Braids their hair
A butterfly always follows her and their in her fur
Butterflies made up of petals in her fur
Love origami
Personality in a nutshell a malipulative cat search for attention and love, feeling the need to be perfect, bottling up her emotions to throw away.
Personality

Best believe I'm still bejeweled When I walk in the room
Positive
-Polite
-Kindhearted
-People Pleaser
-Responsible
-Hardworking
-Tidy
-Graceful
-Friendly
-Charming
-Playful

Neutral
-Talkative
-Sarcastic
-Flirty
-Confident
-Attention seeker
-Extroverted
-Humorous
-Adventurous
-Holds Grudges

Negative
-Vain
-Reserved
-Manipulative
-Selfish
-Unfaithful
-Sassy
-Reckless
-Liar
-Daredevil

Plot/Lore
-
-
-
-
-

Trivia
I can still make the whole place shimmer
Character interaction

Aspenfaith
Diamonds in my eyes
Slibling
I polish up real I polish up real nice

About me

Hello! I'm Ve, I'm a big book worm that can play a few instruments, such a cello and piano! Though I could definitely improve at both. I also love listening and playing music. My music choices varying a lot depending on what I'm feeling. I also have a slight interest in theater being in a few shows!
I'm in a ton of different fandoms such as The Owl House, Amphibia, Warrior Cats, Wings of Fire, and Harry Potter! Enjoy reading and writing in my free time and I also enjoy making art in my free time! I especially love drawing cats if you haven't guessed already. I also enjoy all kinds of weather such as rainy, snowy, and foggy weather.
I've been rping for a few years now across a few accounts. I've also been in quite a few rps, though right now I'm in mainly Warrior Cat rps, much of the rps I'm in inspired by the books though I do take interest in Wings of Fire and other book related rps. On a extremely old account I was in fairy tale rps and had much more variety though most of them died. But enough about me.

What's a girl gonna do? A diamond's gotta shine

96498cb wrote:

NamePending_ wrote:

AzfarPogko wrote:

Pibby59 wrote:

Coolsandbox wrote:

champion_ofcloud-var wrote:

Coolsandbox wrote:

champion_ofcloud-var wrote:

Coolsandbox wrote:

champion_ofcloud-var wrote:

Coolsandbox wrote:

igtnathan5 wrote:

champion_ofcloud-var wrote:

Coolsandbox wrote:

igtnathan5 wrote:

Coolsandbox wrote:

champion_ofcloud-var wrote:

Coolsandbox wrote:

champion_ofcloud-var wrote:

theapplesguy2-1 wrote:

champion_ofcloud-var wrote:

theapplesguy2-1 wrote:

can we at least discuss what currency is the best
coin
thats too general
coin is the best currency
No gold is
you cant flip a chunk of gold though
WHAT DO YOU NEED TO FLIP THE COIN FOR!!??!?!

And gold is waaaaay more valuable than a coin

A coin is not even better than a dollar, the coin is $0.01 and the dollar is $1.00

The gold is like $72-$170 dollars I mean come one!

The coin is copper which rusts and gold doesn’t rust if it wasn’t rotton

So did you change your opinion?
a dollar wouldn't exist if coins didn't exist
No, because a coin isn't digital paper like money, a coin is harder than a dollar, and you'd still use a dollar as a coin
money isnt digital i can hold money in my hand

also i think they mean a dollar is made up of coins
yeah and the name of the currency “bitcoin”
Actually, bitcoins are better than coins, they are more expensive, they are golden coins, and they are shiny
$1=100c
Yes I know that the same currency but not the same resource
but still
It’s not what you care, it is what it is
coin came before dollars i think
Right, coins came in the 7th century BC
Dollars were first invented in 1792
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i made it the biggest one :o
MORE BIG!!!!!
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also coins are best
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I have been working on a project recently and I'm having trouble with some of the buttons I am coding. I usually just use the “hide” block when trying to make a button disappear, but that only makes it invisible, and you can still accidentally click it even when you don't know the button is there. It can mess some things up. In the case of the project I'm working on, I have a button for the settings menu. When entering the menu, the Start game button should disappear and not work anymore. I have tried using the “Stop all other scripts” block, but this is pretty permanent and you have to click the green flag to start those scripts up again. (The “Stop all other scripts” block also does not work, because I want the Start game button to come back and be usable when the player exits the Settings menu). Is there any way to stop the scripts (and hide them), until a button is pressed to make them start again (and show)? I would appreciate any and all help I get.

Thank you so much!


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Now I've Been working on a project for awhile but i cant make a proper camera so i really want to understand lists and clones

if you have any idea how to do this please Reply! Have a nice day
Once upon this time,
The lonely tree
Stands on the Hill
Day by day
At an endless cycle.
Everything
Is the same-
Lonely old tree
On the Hill
Watches the world.



I have no eyes. But I see.
I have no ears. But I hear.
I have no nose. But I smell.
I have no mouth. But I speak.
I have no brain. But I think.
And everyday, it’s the same.
Waiting, watching, hoping, that
Something new will come along.

Magic grows and flourishes around me.
Magic is me.
If not magic, there would be no me.
I’ve seen life and death and magic.
It has become
Unbearable.



The little girl
Climbs up the Hill
She waits
And watches.
She,
On the Hill,
Watches the world.



A little flame of a girl climbs up my Hill.
She walks past me, looking out into the Forest.
She takes a step closer,
Overtaken by curiosity.
If I had human feelings,
My stomach would flip.
That Forest
Could be the end of her.

“Careful,”
I rumble.
She jumps back and gasps.
“A talking tree?”
I don’t reply.

The little girl, perhaps,
Age ten,
Frowns.
Her attention is no longer on the Forest.
Today, Something happened.
I saved a life.
If I were a human,
I would have smiled.

“You’re a talking tree.
Or maybe those are the voices
In my head.
Can you answer me?”
She looks towards the Forest again.
And takes a step closer.
I know what she’s doing.

“Don’t.”

She grins.
“Aha! I knew it.”
Her bright red hair shines in the sun.
I sigh, sending a breeze into the world.

“Lovely,”
I grumble.

“I didn’t know trees could be sarcastic.”

“I didn’t know children could be so nosy.”

She frowns.
I laugh.

“You’re a rude tree.
But I think I’ll sit here for now.
Better than boredom.”
This is definitely not Ordinary.


The … not-so-lonely tree
Stands on the Hill
Day by day
And endless cycle.
Nothing was
the same anymore
When the little girl
Came along.


“You’re back?” I ask.

“So surprised?”
Said the little girl.
“I’ve been coming
Everyday now.”

“You’re too smart for someone your age.”

“I get that a lot.”

“Are you planning on coming everyday now?”

“You won’t see the end of me.”
I’ve seen it. All good things end.


Once upon this time,
There was a lonely tree
And a lonely girl
On a not-so-lonely Hill.

Once upon this time,
A good thing ended.



Where did the light come from?
And where did it go?
Why did the flame come?
And why did she go?
Where did the time go?
How did a year pass by,
And suddenly, time stopped again?
How?

Now I’m just
A lonely tree
Standing on
A lonely Hill
Again.


Once upon a time
… There was nothing.



“Mr. Tree?”
An older voice calls.
How long…
Have I been asleep?

I haven't seen the little girl in…
In…
In…
How many years?

A flame of a girl climbs up the hill.
She looks older.
She doesn’t look like a child anymore.
Her face brightens when she sees me.
“Mr. Tree!

“You’re back?”
I ask.
She frowns.

“Of course I’m back.
You probably wonder why
I suddenly stopped coming.”
The lonely tree…

“Yes.”

“I was sent to school.
Far away. I wasn’t wanted here.”
She pulls the coat she was wearing
Tighter around her.
As if to fight off all pain.
If I was human,
I would’ve frowned.

“I’m sorry.”
I’m a tree,
But I said it
With Sincerity.

All good things end…

I guess
A good thing ended
For the both of us.

“It’s fine.”

“But you’re back now? Why?”

“Because I love this town.
It feels… magical.
Plus, I heard
there’s a talking tree on the Hill.”
She smiles.

If I was human,
I would’ve smiled too.

Once upon a time,
There was a
Not-so-lonely tree.
The tree
Finally found
A not-so-lonely
Red-haired
Friend.











end.

Total words: 657
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lgrov44 wrote:

sukit-games wrote:

I want to create a chat for a game I'm making and I am hitting my head because I need at least 11 cloud variables for the chat and for the game itself I need at least another 7 and more for another part (4). Why make this restriction?
This has been answered (sort of) but I just want to add that if you need that many cloud variables, try using a cloud list with each item acting like a cloud variable.
Cloud lists are not a thing.
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scheeepchit_remix wrote:

here's a real nonsensical level
i believe cwktao was the one who first taught me how to do this sort of thing
(in essence, i changed the maximum width of the level - strange things happen because of that)
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hhhhhh-how?
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Hello Scratchers! So it all started when I had this idea for a game where you connect the stars in a constellation but I could never find a way to make a line tool. Does anyone have any ideas?

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⇾ Critique for Coco ⚘

Hey Coco!

{He's gone now, the girl can feel it}

I think it may be interesting to replace “the girl” with “she”, since it matches “he” closer. Just a suggestion of course, since it's up to you what's best rhythmically <3

{strewn on the ground}

I love the imagery - it's absolutely chilling.

{However, the girl's grief-stricken tears bring back no life;}

I feel like the word “however” is a bit unnecessary here, since the idea of him smiling while she's crying already presents the contrast. I love how you wrote about her being unable to bring him back, because it's just showing grief through a really interesting lens ^^

{and covered in greases}

I'm a little confused about what you're trying to say here. Can you clarify it somehow?

{stabs of guilt}

I love how “stabs” is plural. It's such a small detail but it adds a lot ^^

{Her lungs are on a desperate fire, straining for bliss;}

I think that the “a” is a bit unnecessary, and while I do think that bliss works in the context, it may be fun to try other words to see if you like any others. It's not necessarily a big suggestion, but I think it's such a powerful line that could be fun to play with ^^

{The girl had known the deplorable bombs would take over,
And leave them all in a grotesque plague not shorter than forever,
However, none of her beloved family had thought it would come soon-
The heartbreaking troubles of war, their rivals' cruel boon.}

This is more of a general suggestion, but I think that this part is very clear about the story, but I think that you could try making certain parts of it more subtle, using imagery and other literary devices. That's more of a personal opinion, of course, so you do you <3

{The petals torn to pieces,}

Love the imagery!

{the sky settling into a night.}

I also love the imagery of ‘settling’ here, but again with an unnecessary “a” ^^

{Help! she rasps, but not a soul answers her hopeful plead,}

I think ‘plea’ is the grammatically correct word here? I'm not a grammar expert, though ^^' I love the use of the word rasps, though. It's a really great descriptor and it evokes so much emotion.

{skulls' cruel glare}

This imagery, oh my gosh. I love that it adds to the theme of the mc feeling guilty and I also just love the way that the line feels. It's so amazing.

All in all, I think that the imagery throughout the piece is incredible. I think my main suggestion would just to be more subtle about certain happenings, but those are fairly easily fixed thing (in my opinion, at least). Thank you for letting me critique, and I just have to throw in one last time how amazing that line about the skulls is ^^

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Daily #27
3/27/2024
716 words

Original: Scratch Writing Camp (Family Madrigal Parody)
Hey Birdi! // Writing! // Friends! // Competition! // Let's go!
This is a camp, runs in March, July, and November // So full of people, each unique in their way
We are a family, we support each other // 15 cabins, each one gets to shine
Oh! // But let's be clear, Birdi hosts this camp // Along with Bakie, Honey, and Kat
And every time it gets better again // There's just a lot you got to write down
Welcome to Scratch Writing Camp! // This is Scratch Writing Camp! // (You're gonna love it)
Where all the people are fantastical and magical
You can be part of Scratch Writing Camp!
OH MY GOSH SWC IS STARTING!!!!! // WHAT CABIN WILL I BE IN????? // WHO'S GONNA BE MY LEADER??? (WHAT ABOUT MY COS????)
Alright, alright, relax!
IT'S PHYSICALLY IMPOSSIBLE TO RELAX!!! // I CAN'T WAIT!!! // THERE'S TOO MUCH EXCITEMENT IN MY VEINS!!!
And that's why (diet) coke it's for grown-ups!
In SWC, we've got dailies and weeklies // They help earn points to, well, help your cabin prevail
And then cabin wars // We don't talk about cabin wars!!
They say you have to write until your fingers die // Oh!
There's the leaders and their amazing co's, whoa // The truth is, they help run this show, whoa
We're nothing without campers, though // Come and join us in this cool adventure, eee
Welcome to Scratch Writing Camp // This is the home of Scratch Writing Camp! // (Look, word wars!)
I know it sounds a bit fantastical and magical // But you can be part of Scratch Writing Camp
Several people fell in love with Scratch Writing Camp // And now they're all part of Scratch Writing Camp
So yeah, this is our fifteenth session // So many memories // Help us create more // (Let's go, let's go!)
We swear to always, help those around us // And earn the writing, that somehow found us // The camp keeps going, the chaos keeps growing
But passion and dedication will keep the spirit burning // And each new set of campers must keep the spirit burning
Google Translated
Hello animals! // They write! // Friends! // happy! // Come here!
This is a camp that takes place in March, July and November. // Full of people, each in his own way.
We are a family and support each other. // 15 houses, all crossed
Oh! // But let's be clear: This camp is owned by Birdie. // Bucky, Honey and Kate.
and always good // There are many things to write about.
Welcome to Scratch Writing Camp! // No Writing Camp! // (I loved you)
Everyone is beautiful and beautiful. // You can join the Scratch Writing Camp!
OMG SWC has started!!!!! // Who am I to be captain????? // who is my sister??? (Is that my leg???)
Please stay!
I can't calm down!!! // I have the power!!! // I have so many thoughts in my veins!!!
So Coca-Cola (Light) is for adults!
We provide daily and weekly SWC services. // It will help you earn points to improve your hero.
Then the room lit up // We are not talking about civil war!!
They say you have to write with your fingers tied. // Oh!
Good editors and one, good! // In fact, it helps make this vision more realistic.
But we are nothing without camp. // Join this amazing journey, won't you?
Welcome to Scratch Writing Camp // This is the home of Writing Camp Zero! // (See, it's a mistake!)
I find it magical and fun. // But you will enter Scratch writing camp.
A lot of people appreciated the Writing Camp. // And now they are all members of Free Writing Camp.
Yes, yes, this is our fifteenth meeting. // There are many things to remember
Help us build it // (Oh Oh Oh!)
We promise to help the people around us. // And the prizes will be won. // The camp continues and the violence continues.
But your hard work and dedication will help you progress. // Each new group of campers must do their own thing.

A/N: Before we start, I would like to say that this is an SWC fanfiction and any portrayals of actual people are just caricatures and I tried my best to minimize these appearances ^^ This is not made to make fun of everyone and I honed in on specific lyrics that I found funny. The argument here is also just all fun, so don't take any of this to heart. This also isn't my best handiwork, but hopefully it's enjoyable all the same. And without further ado, let's get started!

“Would you all please quiet down?” Script bellows, her hands slamming down onto the white table in front of her. The chatter subsides for a moment before new words take its place. She sighs, shaking her head at the other cabins in the room with her.

“Come on, guys!” Utopian says cheerily, “We've got to figure out the answer to this together!”
“No one cares, Uto; not everyone gets a happily ever after,” Thriller remarks.
“Relax, she's new,” Fairy Tales rolls her eyes, leaning towards Utopian. “Don't mind Thriller, he just think he's all high and mighty whenever a new cabin comes around because he's been around for a while.”
Thriller scoffs. “I'll have you know that Birdi, unlike the rest of you, knew that Thriller was the superior cabin. It's a shame that she's now a gHost.”
“You do know that I was one of the first cabins?” Script asks, glaring at Thriller, “Though no one seems to remember that around here!”
Poetry pipes up, “Me too! Though I did get a name change since then.” She lets out a laugh.
“So what, you're bragging that you're old?” Thriller mocks, twirling a metal stick in their hands.
Script opens her mouth to speak, but is cut off by Sci-Fi. "Is that my leg?“
”What, this old thing?“ Thriller smirks, holding up Sci-Fi's metal limb.
Sci-Fi looks down at their feet–sorry, foot. ”Give it back!“

”Well, back to the matter at hand,“ Fairy Tales butts in, grabbing Sci-Fi's leg and tossing it back to them. ”I for one, think that the animals should be allowed to join camp. There are plenty of talking animals and they should be given the same rights!“
”Uh huh…“ Sci-Fi drawls, attaching their limb back on. ”Yeah, no. Humans are far superior and–quiet Poetry, cyborg, human, same thing–and if we can defeat AI, we are most certainly above animals. Talking animals or not, they cannot be let in to SWC.“
”I agree,“ Fanfiction speaks up for the first time, ”Look at the past of SWC canon. It's always been humans. We can't just go and change the laws of SWC to now include animals, just because now they've learned to write!“

”Is everyone forgetting what I am?“ Thriller asks, flitting his wings.
Sci-Fi rolls their eyes. ”Like I said, cyborg, human… insect-humanoid, whatever, we're fine. Just the animal-animals. They're pets. Or wild animals. They shouldn't be allowed to learn how to write, because who knows what they could do!“
”Finally, someone understands!“ Dystopian perks up. ”The world is already in so much ruin; if we give animals that kind of power, they could take over us all, and then the world will be in an even worse state!“
Utopian sinks into her seat, her flowing dress falling to the floor as her face pales.
”Dysto, you should stop, you're freaking your sister out…“ Thriller says, glancing at Utopian's fragile state.
”Who's my sister? Oh yeah, Utopian~“ Dystopian sing-songs. ”It's kind of confusing because she's been kept away from me for too long.“ He flashes a grin towards Utopian, who manages a weak smile.

”If we can't come to a decision on our own, let's get the gHosts on the line to help us,“ Script recommends, wanting this conversation to end.
A few looks are shared with the rest of the other cabins and they reluctantly nod.
”Utopian, get the gHosts on the line,“ Dystopian says, motioning towards the console.
Utopian nods and scrambles over the the console, tapping away at the controls that she has learned, with her brother looking over her shoulder.

The first sounds of a ringtone echo through the hollow room.
”Uh, hello?“ a blurred image of Birdi comes into focus on the projector.
”Uh, hi! I'm Utopian, and the cabins are having a bit of a predicament and we were just hoping that, you know, you, Bucky, Honey, and Kate could help us, because you guys are gHosts and all and-“ Utopian rambles.
”Geez, I think you've got the wrong number or something,“ a voice says from offscreen, the image shifting from Birdi to an umbrella and sand, ”There aren't any Kates around here.“
”Oh my gosh," Dystopian mutters under his breath, and he quickly hangs up the call.

Utopian's pale face turns beet red.
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DewMcStew wrote:

Lol. I am quite a bit older than the average Scratch demographic though haha
Same. Im 18.
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-lCosl- wrote:

Just-Ideas wrote:

Hey Cosi, here's the banner and link to my shop so you can actually put it on the partners list:

https://scratch.mit.edu/discuss/topic/749422/?page=1#post-7876680 <– Link
https://u.cubeupload.com/CloudIncOfficially/Addaheading.png <– Banner

Thanks. I put your shop up on my list, now you do the same!

So… I have a problem, I can't update the “Partners” post because Scratch thinks it contains unsuitable language (it doesn't)? I guess you're going to have to wait until the glitch is fixed up.
Alrighty! That sucks lol.
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Just-Ideas wrote:

Hey Cosi, here's the banner and link to my shop so you can actually put it on the partners list:

https://scratch.mit.edu/discuss/topic/749422/?page=1#post-7876680 <– Link
https://u.cubeupload.com/CloudIncOfficially/Addaheading.png <– Banner

Thanks. I put your shop up on my list, now you do the same!

So… I have a problem, I can't update the “Partners” post because Scratch thinks it contains unsuitable language (it doesn't)? I guess you're going to have to wait until the glitch is fixed up.

Kitten_Boy_10 wrote:

Oh. I just tested it and it works. It might've been a problem I had fixed and not tested before I put this out. Sorry for wasting your time.
Wait, nevermind, when I added it to make the ButtonClicked variable change to 16 when it's clicked, it started the problem again.

Kitten_Boy_10 wrote:

Oh. I just tested it and it works. It might've been a problem I had fixed and not tested before I put this out. Sorry for wasting your time.
No worries =]
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-Almations- wrote:

I don't think root beer is an alcoholic drink, but it's best to steer clear of direct drinking references.
I've never heard this before, but Root Beer would actually be a really good thing to use in these projects - it's not beer, but it's still alluding toward beer - that would be a smart idea for a cartoony/silly Scratch animation.
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sukit-games wrote:

I want to create a chat for a game I'm making and I am hitting my head because I need at least 11 cloud variables for the chat and for the game itself I need at least another 7 and more for another part (4). Why make this restriction?
This has been answered (sort of) but I just want to add that if you need that many cloud variables, try using a cloud list with each item acting like a cloud variable.
Oh. I just tested it and it works. It might've been a problem I had fixed and not tested before I put this out. Sorry for wasting your time.
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In the “deal damage” custom block for the attack, where you would normally but the damage amount (ex 6 for a basic slash, 8 for an aqua blast, etc) put an
((((item ( 1) of [RNG_Moduli] :: list) mod (101)) mod (9)) + (3))
then add the RNG Change block after it.
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This would not be a private messaging issue, rather an unmoderated chat video - these chats wouldn't be private - they are viewable in the cloud monitor for the project. This issue is that it could be easy to type inappropriate messages. I would be careful with this, and ask more specific and clarifying questions in the Questions about Scratch forum as you're making it.
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Daily 027: 460 words, Rickroll gone wrong

“And I won’t give it to you.”
Moonlight, starlight, late night. Perfect for romance.
She looks so perfect. But you’re holding back. Skirting the edges.
She’s like a fire to a moth, and she’ll hurt you if you get too close.
She’s trying so hard. She wants you, and it’s so tempting to give in, to revel in being wanted, to tell her yes, you’ll singe your wings and fall to the ground so you can live one glorious moment in her brilliance.
But the other part of you, the part that’s always telling you to do things you don’t like, that part is telling you that smile is dangerous. She’ll pull you down, and you’ll never be able to fly back up. Her light is false, fleeting, like a candle next to a bonfire.
“This will not go away.”
It’s so hard. She’s what you’ve wanted for forever, ever since you were in kindergarten and her honey curls caught the light and shone like gold. Ever since you ran in the playground, playing tag, always striving to tag her. You never could. She ran too fast.
Such a simple game. Such a complicated relationship. Yet both boiled down to one concept.
You’re chasing her. You’ve always chased her. She could outrun you if she wanted. But she’s slowing down. Letting you catch up.
You could keep running. You could ignore the fact that her fire is all on the outside, all in her face, and go for it. You could shove your doubts aside, tell yourself that if you didn’t take this chance, when would you get another one? This feeling isn’t going away.
“Never hurt yourself with lies.”
That’s what the voice inside says. The one you hate listening to, and the one that’s most often right in the end. The one telling you to look beyond a pretty face. You don’t want to look beyond the pretty face. You don’t want to believe you have to. You want to think that she’s just as beautiful on the inside.
The moth swoops in dangerously, fluttering closer to the heat.
“Please don’t make me cry.”
You’re fighting with yourself now. Pleading with yourself. Please, just give me a chance. Giver her a chance. It’ll all work out in the end, won’t it?
Closer…closer…closer…
“Never say goodbye.”
Yeah. That’s what you want to do. Never say goodbye to her.
But are you saying goodbye to your reason? Your conscience? Your morals?
Are you ruining yourself for a pair of blue eyes?
“Never hurt yourself with lies.”
You’re lying to yourself. You’ve been lying to yourself since kindergarten.
It’s time to walk away.
So you do.
The moth wheels away and vanishes into the night, wings singed but whole, flying free.
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SofiaGraceH wrote:

petspez wrote:

You should report those mean comments, but anyway, kind of. The Community Guidelines do say “Be Respectful.”
It's not really reportable and you'd have to use Contact Us to explain that kind of situation if I user is stalking or bugging you since there isn't a feature to block anyone

Hmm yes. But this does seem like quite the problematic grey area since there is no blocking feature for a reason, but you also need to be respectful.
No, you can love and favorite their projects whenever you want. You are also welcome to leave constructive and polite comments on their project - they can't report respectful comments, and technically stalking is allowed (but be nice and don't be creepy).
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depresso-boiyo wrote:

DewMcStew wrote:

Hey guys sorry for falling off the face of the earth for a while there. I got an actual job and life got slightly insane for a bit. I'm a little less busy now, but if I have any outstanding orders it would be greatly appreciated if someone could pick them up.

I'm still able to be active enough to keep managing the shop, but I don't think I can handle any orders right now. Sorry for the inconvenience.
*slaps knee* the younguns got a job faster than i did… *deep breath* BaCk In My daY… . . . . . . .
im sorry ill leave now but congrats
Lol. I am quite a bit older than the average Scratch demographic though haha

Just-Ideas wrote:

You're not allowed to use follows as a prize. Scratch Team says so.
bro every game jam gives follows
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petspez wrote:

You should report those mean comments, but anyway, kind of. The Community Guidelines do say “Be Respectful.”
It's not really reportable and you'd have to use Contact Us to explain that kind of situation if I user is stalking or bugging you since there isn't a feature to block anyone

Hmm yes. But this does seem like quite the problematic grey area since there is no blocking feature for a reason, but you also need to be respectful.
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Masterscratch1117 wrote:

gplb2718 wrote:

DuWeido wrote:

How do u get that new potion for mace
Wdym
In his hopbar there’s a potion like thing
where
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You should report those mean comments, but anyway, kind of. The Community Guidelines do say “Be Respectful.”
It's not really reportable and you'd have to use Contact Us to explain that kind of situation if I user is stalking or bugging you since there isn't a feature to block anyone