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Feb 15, 2024 22:48:06
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Yeah, I think that's the best idea.That's what I was thinking, actually. I completely agree.we should wait on 5_g to tell us which we should make though. I'm actually fine with either since either can be woven in with the rest of the story.
Feb 16, 2024 04:22:53
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I think that we should focus less on the time periods thing and more on the theme of the realms themselves, the desert can be like a steampunk industrial place and the ocean can futuristic for asthetic purposes to set it apart from the other realms, and the forest can be medieval.Yeah, I think that's the best idea.That's what I was thinking, actually. I completely agree.we should wait on 5_g to tell us which we should make though. I'm actually fine with either since either can be woven in with the rest of the story.
Feb 16, 2024 09:41:12
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We dont have to focus on the time period at all to do with the realm, but it could add some cool mechanics where if you change one thing in the forest (past) it effects the ocean (future)
Feb 16, 2024 15:09:07
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I like that idea.I think that we should focus less on the time periods thing and more on the theme of the realms themselves, the desert can be like a steampunk industrial place and the ocean can futuristic for asthetic purposes to set it apart from the other realms, and the forest can be medieval.Yeah, I think that's the best idea.That's what I was thinking, actually. I completely agree.we should wait on 5_g to tell us which we should make though. I'm actually fine with either since either can be woven in with the rest of the story.
Feb 16, 2024 15:11:27
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OH YEAH! So the player has to complete one realm to unlock the other! We dont have to focus on the time period at all to do with the realm, but it could add some cool mechanics where if you change one thing in the forest (past) it effects the ocean (future)
Feb 16, 2024 16:25:13
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Game developing time! They can start in the forest, (past) and work their way to the desert (present-ish) and then go to the ocean (future). After they unlock all three, they can freely move throughout them. They can also go back to any of the unlocked ones if they are trying to get to the next one.OH YEAH! So the player has to complete one realm to unlock the other! We dont have to focus on the time period at all to do with the realm, but it could add some cool mechanics where if you change one thing in the forest (past) it effects the ocean (future)
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The player is currently in the desert, and trying to unlock the ocean. They go back to the forest to get some sort of clue that will help unlock the ocean. After they unlock the ocean, they go back to some key place in the desert and figure out how to get to the fourth realm. Note: that doesn't have to be what happens, just an example. It also shouldn't take too long, since the game mainly focuses on the fourth realm. There should be some auto-saving, too, because it seems this game will take a while.
Feb 16, 2024 16:49:08
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I LOVE THIS IDEA!Game developing time! They can start in the forest, (past) and work their way to the desert (present-ish) and then go to the ocean (future). After they unlock all three, they can freely move throughout them. They can also go back to any of the unlocked ones if they are trying to get to the next one.OH YEAH! So the player has to complete one realm to unlock the other! We dont have to focus on the time period at all to do with the realm, but it could add some cool mechanics where if you change one thing in the forest (past) it effects the ocean (future)
EXAMPLE:
The player is currently in the desert, and trying to unlock the ocean. They go back to the forest to get some sort of clue that will help unlock the ocean. After they unlock the ocean, they go back to some key place in the desert and figure out how to get to the fourth realm. Note: that doesn't have to be what happens, just an example. It also shouldn't take too long, since the game mainly focuses on the fourth realm. There should be some auto-saving, too, because it seems this game will take a while.
Feb 16, 2024 16:49:27
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unfortunately, due to the limits of cloud variables, this isn't really possible, but we can still add a save system There should be some auto-saving, too, because it seems this game will take a while.
(yes autosaving can be added, but for only like 20 - 30 players at most depending on how many variables would need to be saved)
And also, i think their actions in the forest should affect the desert, and actions in the desert and forest affect the ocean, that's not really a necessary addition, but it would be cool!
Feb 16, 2024 22:20:07
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YEAH!OH YEAH! So the player has to complete one realm to unlock the other! We dont have to focus on the time period at all to do with the realm, but it could add some cool mechanics where if you change one thing in the forest (past) it effects the ocean (future)
Feb 16, 2024 22:29:42
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With this feature, we could add endless replay value.YEAH!OH YEAH! So the player has to complete one realm to unlock the other! We dont have to focus on the time period at all to do with the realm, but it could add some cool mechanics where if you change one thing in the forest (past) it effects the ocean (future)
Feb 16, 2024 23:12:53
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would we hard code this in, or should i use some lists algorithms to calculate what should happen based off of each action (apart from the story line) should do?With this feature, we could add endless replay value.YEAH!OH YEAH! So the player has to complete one realm to unlock the other! We dont have to focus on the time period at all to do with the realm, but it could add some cool mechanics where if you change one thing in the forest (past) it effects the ocean (future)
Feb 17, 2024 05:02:10
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wdym we wont need a algorithm just to track story progresswould we hard code this in, or should i use some lists algorithms to calculate what should happen based off of each action (apart from the story line) should do?With this feature, we could add endless replay value.YEAH!OH YEAH! So the player has to complete one realm to unlock the other! We dont have to focus on the time period at all to do with the realm, but it could add some cool mechanics where if you change one thing in the forest (past) it effects the ocean (future)
Feb 17, 2024 06:07:48
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if you need help i could do it so easywould we hard code this in, or should i use some lists algorithms to calculate what should happen based off of each action (apart from the story line) should do?With this feature, we could add endless replay value.YEAH!OH YEAH! So the player has to complete one realm to unlock the other! We dont have to focus on the time period at all to do with the realm, but it could add some cool mechanics where if you change one thing in the forest (past) it effects the ocean (future)
Feb 17, 2024 14:35:27
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Do you guys want a coding thread so as not to clog up the main or story writing…?
Feb 17, 2024 17:01:14
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Quantum1993
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I'm not a coder for this game, but a list seems logical.if you need help i could do it so easywould we hard code this in, or should i use some lists algorithms to calculate what should happen based off of each action (apart from the story line) should do?With this feature, we could add endless replay value.YEAH!OH YEAH! So the player has to complete one realm to unlock the other! We dont have to focus on the time period at all to do with the realm, but it could add some cool mechanics where if you change one thing in the forest (past) it effects the ocean (future)
when I receive [an action by the player v]
add [outcome] to [list of outcomes v]
when I receive [enter forest realm v]
if <[list of outcomes v] contains [a certain result] ?> then
broadcast [change something in the forest realm v]
add [forest realm change 1] to [list of outcomes v]
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Feb 17, 2024 17:28:00
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Sounds like a good idea! Do you guys want a coding thread so as not to clog up the main or story writing…?
Feb 17, 2024 17:50:38
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Okay. Gimme a sec…Sounds like a good idea! Do you guys want a coding thread so as not to clog up the main or story writing…?
Feb 19, 2024 16:04:30
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Well, as long as there’s a saving feature, I guess.unfortunately, due to the limits of cloud variables, this isn't really possible, but we can still add a save system There should be some auto-saving, too, because it seems this game will take a while.
(yes autosaving can be added, but for only like 20 - 30 players at most depending on how many variables would need to be saved)
And also, i think their actions in the forest should affect the desert, and actions in the desert and forest affect the ocean, that's not really a necessary addition, but it would be cool!
Feb 19, 2024 16:06:21
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Ignore.
Feb 19, 2024 16:34:08
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Quantum1993
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I did find something that might help with autosaving, but it isn't reliable yet.Well, as long as there’s a saving feature, I guess.unfortunately, due to the limits of cloud variables, this isn't really possible, but we can still add a save system There should be some auto-saving, too, because it seems this game will take a while.
(yes autosaving can be added, but for only like 20 - 30 players at most depending on how many variables would need to be saved)
And also, i think their actions in the forest should affect the desert, and actions in the desert and forest affect the ocean, that's not really a necessary addition, but it would be cool!
https://scratch.mit.edu/projects/967285069/
Feb 21, 2024 01:59:55
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https://scratch.mit.edu/discuss/topic/741867/There is no need for another topic, just use the main one for everything except writing, the only reason writing got their own topic is because writing discussion uses a lot of posts
Feb 21, 2024 02:00:56
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Understood; I already closed the other one. There is no need for another topic, just use the main one for everything except writing, the only reason writing got their own topic is because writing discussion uses a lot of posts
Feb 21, 2024 02:10:08
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prishaJuni
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Hello guys! Please make a list of all the art needed when you're ready!
Feb 22, 2024 02:49:24
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Kittygirl4ever
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I'm guessing we'll need a main character, king ‘Jonathan,’ and the twin. Maybe some features for each realm? (like lava rocks for the fire realm, coral for the water, and trees for the jungle.) Hello guys! Please make a list of all the art needed when you're ready!
Feb 22, 2024 21:04:32
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The main character needs a name and a (customizable?) appearance. I'm thinking about this character being a boy, if that's fine with everyone. Maybe we could make the gender customizable.I'm guessing we'll need a main character, king ‘Jonathan,’ and the twin. Maybe some features for each realm? (like lava rocks for the fire realm, coral for the water, and trees for the jungle.) Hello guys! Please make a list of all the art needed when you're ready!
Feb 22, 2024 21:14:48
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Malicondi
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^ this is what i asked earlier, still waiting on agreement
Feb 22, 2024 21:21:53
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I support the mc being a boy to make things easier. Do you guys want the character customization/selection screen pixelized or just regular?The main character needs a name and a (customizable?) appearance. I'm thinking about this character being a boy, if that's fine with everyone. Maybe we could make the gender customizable.I'm guessing we'll need a main character, king ‘Jonathan,’ and the twin. Maybe some features for each realm? (like lava rocks for the fire realm, coral for the water, and trees for the jungle.) Hello guys! Please make a list of all the art needed when you're ready!
Feb 22, 2024 22:10:53
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If there is a customisable appearencem then there should probably be a customisably gender. Also, I think that the style is pixels, so pixels.I support the mc being a boy to make things easier. Do you guys want the character customization/selection screen pixelized or just regular?The main character needs a name and a (customizable?) appearance. I'm thinking about this character being a boy, if that's fine with everyone. Maybe we could make the gender customizable.I'm guessing we'll need a main character, king ‘Jonathan,’ and the twin. Maybe some features for each realm? (like lava rocks for the fire realm, coral for the water, and trees for the jungle.) Hello guys! Please make a list of all the art needed when you're ready!
Feb 22, 2024 22:19:39
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Okay.If there is a customisable appearencem then there should probably be a customisably gender. Also, I think that the style is pixels, so pixels.I support the mc being a boy to make things easier. Do you guys want the character customization/selection screen pixelized or just regular? -clip-
Feb 22, 2024 23:25:57
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*most of the style is pixels, some artists dont use pixel artOkay.If there is a customisable appearencem then there should probably be a customisably gender. Also, I think that the style is pixels, so pixels.I support the mc being a boy to make things easier. Do you guys want the character customization/selection screen pixelized or just regular? -clip-
Feb 23, 2024 00:41:04
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Okay! We have a LOT to do!
Here's what we have so far:
- Three realms (fourth is hidden until all three are completed)
- King _______ (NAMES PLEASE) has become corrupt by the power of the Tablet of Truth, and now people fear his merciless rule
- Player (Name?) must find missing sister and with her help overthrow King _______(WE NEED NAMES!)
- After fighting the three generals of the three realms, Player finds out that she is imprisoned in the fourth realm's prison
- Player tries to free her without alerting King _______ and fails, boss battle
Realms:
- Burning Badlands (Industrial present theme?)
- Mammoth Grove (Ancient magic-y forest theme)
- Deepsea Dominion (Super high-tech futuristic aesthetics)
- Obscuria (Mysterious darkness)
Art Needed:
- A base (for both genders) - I think the same artist should draw the twin
- Hairstyles (Maybe?)
- Different color eyes, skin, and hair
- Scenes for each realm (We need to do more on this area)
- Generals (Bosses) How do they look?
- King _______ How does he look?
- Twin sister
Here's what we have so far:
- Three realms (fourth is hidden until all three are completed)
- King _______ (NAMES PLEASE) has become corrupt by the power of the Tablet of Truth, and now people fear his merciless rule
- Player (Name?) must find missing sister and with her help overthrow King _______(WE NEED NAMES!)
- After fighting the three generals of the three realms, Player finds out that she is imprisoned in the fourth realm's prison
- Player tries to free her without alerting King _______ and fails, boss battle
Realms:
- Burning Badlands (Industrial present theme?)
- Mammoth Grove (Ancient magic-y forest theme)
- Deepsea Dominion (Super high-tech futuristic aesthetics)
- Obscuria (Mysterious darkness)
Art Needed:
- A base (for both genders) - I think the same artist should draw the twin
- Hairstyles (Maybe?)
- Different color eyes, skin, and hair
- Scenes for each realm (We need to do more on this area)
- Generals (Bosses) How do they look?
- King _______ How does he look?
- Twin sister
Feb 23, 2024 00:45:53
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prishaJuni
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Name Ideas:
King Jonathan
- King Jairn
- King Phobus
- King Mirrikh
Player Name (has to be gender neutral)
- Alex
- Ash
- Trix
- _________ help me out here
Twin's Name
- Adira
- Vivienne
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General Names
King Jonathan
- King Jairn
- King Phobus
- King Mirrikh
Player Name (has to be gender neutral)
- Alex
- Ash
- Trix
- _________ help me out here
Twin's Name
- Adira
- Vivienne
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General Names
Feb 23, 2024 00:47:13
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Malicondi
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i'm bad at names i just take ideas i'm given and draw/code them lol
Feb 23, 2024 00:47:16
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BlauHourglass
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I think for the player's name, that should be custom. Name Ideas:
King Jonathan
- King Jairn
- King Phobus
- King Mirrikh
Player Name (has to be gender neutral)
- Alex
- Ash
- Trix
- _________ help me out here
Twin's Name
- Adira
- Vivienne
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General Names
Feb 23, 2024 00:57:34
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Malicondi
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yeah, i think that's a good idea. I think for the player's name, that should be custom.
Feb 23, 2024 02:02:59
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A lot of people seem to want a different name for the king.
Since I came up with that idea, here are some names:
King Agham
King Angon
King Winfred
King Elton
King Grant
Since I came up with that idea, here are some names:
King Agham
King Angon
King Winfred
King Elton
King Grant
Feb 23, 2024 02:40:09
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GENER NEUTRAL NAMES?? I GOTCHU!!!-snip- -snip-
~Luca
~Alex
~Kellen/Kellyn
~Logan
~Jade
~Charlie
~Wren (I like best)
~Robbie/Robin
~Holy
~Remy/Remi
~Billie/Billy
~Nelly/Nellie
I also like King Angon. .For the twin, here are some names
~Beth
~Ryli
~Mirelle
~Jaden
~Mila
~Josephine
~Gina
~Brooke (I like best)
~Leila
~Phoebe
Feb 23, 2024 23:13:11
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I agree!yeah, i think that's a good idea. I think for the player's name, that should be custom.
Feb 23, 2024 23:14:36
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Let's do a vote for the twin names!GENER NEUTRAL NAMES?? I GOTCHU!!!-snip- -snip-
~Luca
~Alex
~Kellen/Kellyn
~Logan
~Jade
~Charlie
~Wren (I like best)
~Robbie/Robin
~Holy
~Remy/Remi
~Billie/Billy
~Nelly/Nellie
I also like King Angon. .For the twin, here are some names
~Beth
~Ryli
~Mirelle
~Jaden
~Mila
~Josephine
~Gina
~Brooke (I like best)
~Leila
~Phoebe
I vote Mirelle.
Feb 24, 2024 02:59:16
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Quantum1993
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It's an easter egg.I also like King Angon.-snip- -snip-
The main villain of The Legend of Zelda series is Ganon, so I mixed it up, and got Angon
Feb 24, 2024 16:13:45
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I also like Mirelle… or Leila. Something full of ‘l’s, haha.Let's do a vote for the twin names!GENER NEUTRAL NAMES?? I GOTCHU!!!-snip- -snip-
~Luca
~Alex
~Kellen/Kellyn
~Logan
~Jade
~Charlie
~Wren (I like best)
~Robbie/Robin
~Holy
~Remy/Remi
~Billie/Billy
~Nelly/Nellie
I also like King Angon. .For the twin, here are some names
~Beth
~Ryli
~Mirelle
~Jaden
~Mila
~Josephine
~Gina
~Brooke (I like best)
~Leila
~Phoebe
I vote Mirelle.
Feb 25, 2024 04:03:36
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I like Mirelle or Brooke. Seems like Mirelle is winningI also like Mirelle… or Leila. Something full of ‘l’s, haha.Let's do a vote for the twin names!-snip--snip- -snip-
For the twin, here are some names
~Beth
~Ryli
~Mirelle
~Jaden
~Mila
~Josephine
~Gina
~Brooke (I like best)
~Leila
~Phoebe
I vote Mirelle.
Feb 25, 2024 15:25:02
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Mirelle is just.. simple, pretty, and elegant. And also kinda fits the “fantasy”. It's not generic either…
Feb 29, 2024 14:34:34
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prishaJuni
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Guys, we NEED to get into the specifics now. Which realm do we start with?
Feb 29, 2024 14:36:30
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Ok! The name is officially Mirelle. Mirelle is just.. simple, pretty, and elegant. And also kinda fits the “fantasy”. It's not generic either…
Feb 29, 2024 14:39:21
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But maybe… since the mc's name is customizable, maybe it could be the twin's name.Ok! The name is officially Mirelle. Mirelle is just.. simple, pretty, and elegant. And also kinda fits the “fantasy”. It's not generic either…
Feb 29, 2024 14:45:53
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Oh, I thought that it was for the twin.But maybe… since the mc's name is customizable, maybe it could be the twin's name.Ok! The name is officially Mirelle. Mirelle is just.. simple, pretty, and elegant. And also kinda fits the “fantasy”. It's not generic either…
I suggest we start with the first realm: the normal/earth/foresty realm. Guys, we NEED to get into the specifics now. Which realm do we start with?
Feb 29, 2024 15:13:04
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I'm starting a vote for the king's name.
I vote for Angon.
I vote for Angon.
Feb 29, 2024 15:17:36
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currently, I'm coding a pathfinding algorithm that we can use for the game, for enemies.
sidenote: i like Mirelle and Angon as names
sidenote: i like Mirelle and Angon as names