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Welcome!
Welcome to the official forum of the Star Wars Book Universe (name may be changed)! This is a collab where we're building Star Wars from the ground up with through the use of Scratch books.
Lore Library:
https://scratch.mit.edu/discuss/topic/664668/
Sign-Up here
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List of members
Writers
Codey9
Platypus_WKeyboard
AwesomeUser23
ganeshsai
boom2ratz
jcpbuilder
Redowl3
Qloakonscratch
SMFG_Comics
HexagonWorld
DerpyPig03
Editors
Codey9
AwesomeUser23
boom2ratz
Qloakonscratch
Historians
Codey9
Platypus_WKeyboard
ganeshsai
jcpbuilder
Ieatcats333
Qloakonscratch
caysenboy
HexagonWorld

Slate
Ruin (jcpbuilder, Series 1)
The Alien of ASteroid X (Platypus_WKeyboard, Series 3)
The Swamp (jcpbuilder, Series 1)
The Phantom (Codey9, Series 1)
Maul: Son of the Night (DerpyPig03, Series 1)
Revan (Redowl3, Series 1)
66 (AwesomeUser23, Series 2 or 3)
Ana (AwesomeUser23, Series 1)
The Mandalorian (boom2ratz, Series 4)
Outbound Flight (Codey9, Series 2)
Creed I (Qloakonscratch, Series 1)
Untitled Thrawn Book (jcpbuilder, Series 3 or 4)
Untitled Darth Nihilus Book (Codey9, Series TBD)

Timeline
Eras:
High Republic
Great War
Sith Empire
Galactic Republic
Clone Wars
Galactic Empire
New Republic
More to be added.

Here

Platypus_WKeyboard wrote:

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Hi

Codey9 wrote:

Platypus_WKeyboard wrote:

Here

Hi

Hello there

Platypus_WKeyboard wrote:

Codey9 wrote:

Platypus_WKeyboard wrote:

Here

Hi

Hello there

General Kenobi, you are a bold one.

Codey9 wrote:

Platypus_WKeyboard wrote:

Codey9 wrote:

Platypus_WKeyboard wrote:

Here

Hi

Hello there

General Kenobi, you are a bold one.

Lol

Black Sparrow (Working Title) Pitch

Premise: A ragtag group of rogues face a threat that could possibly break the galaxy.

Black Sparrow Crew
The Captain- Kent Taske
Pilot- Maxon Aryss
First Mate- Anais Almeida
Muscle- Jinik
Droid- Sterling
Explosive Expert- Elgar Finn
Mechanic- Addison “Addy” Leuf
Jedi- Dereck Thaneo- A failed actor skilled in sword fighting stole a lightsaber off a dead Jedis hand and has mastered sleight of hand magic trick to woo crowds as a “Jedi” and to make a quick buck. Joining the crew of the Black Sparrow to make money but ends up way over his head
Con Artist- Catherine Thull


The Villains
Tionas Nakk- He’s a zabrak
The Q’annix- An alien plague that eats through anything and reanimates the dead

Side Characters

TBD
TBD
TBD
TBD
TBD
TBD
TBD
TBD

Act One

Act Two

Act Three

Platypus_WKeyboard wrote:

Black Sparrow (Working Title) Pitch

Premise: A ragtag group of rogues face a threat that could possibly break the galaxy.

Black Sparrow Crew
The Captain- Kent Taske
Pilot- Maxon Aryss
First Mate- Anais Almeida
Muscle- Jinik
Droid- Sterling
Explosive Expert- Elgar Finn
Mechanic- Addison “Addy” Leuf
Jedi- Dereck Thaneo- A failed actor skilled in sword fighting stole a lightsaber off a dead Jedis hand and has mastered sleight of hand magic trick to woo crowds as a “Jedi” and to make a quick buck. Joining the crew of the Black Sparrow to make money but ends up way over his head
Con Artist- Catherine Thull


The Villains
Tionas Nakk- He’s a zabrak
The Q’annix- An alien plague that eats through anything and reanimates the dead

Side Characters

TBD
TBD
TBD
TBD
TBD
TBD
TBD
TBD

Act One

Act Two

Act Three

Looks good so far!

Codey9 wrote:

Platypus_WKeyboard wrote:

Black Sparrow (Working Title) Pitch

Premise: A ragtag group of rogues face a threat that could possibly break the galaxy.

Black Sparrow Crew
The Captain- Kent Taske
Pilot- Maxon Aryss
First Mate- Anais Almeida
Muscle- Jinik
Droid- Sterling
Explosive Expert- Elgar Finn
Mechanic- Addison “Addy” Leuf
Jedi- Dereck Thaneo- A failed actor skilled in sword fighting stole a lightsaber off a dead Jedis hand and has mastered sleight of hand magic trick to woo crowds as a “Jedi” and to make a quick buck. Joining the crew of the Black Sparrow to make money but ends up way over his head
Con Artist- Catherine Thull


The Villains
Tionas Nakk- He’s a zabrak
The Q’annix- An alien plague that eats through anything and reanimates the dead

Side Characters

TBD
TBD
TBD
TBD
TBD
TBD
TBD
TBD

Act One

Act Two

Act Three

Looks good so far!

Thanks

Hello there.

AwesomeUser23 wrote:

Hello there.

General Kenobi?!?!?!

Codey9 wrote:

AwesomeUser23 wrote:

Hello there.

General Kenobi?!?!?!

You’re a bold one.

Okay, I’m gonna pitch a Sith villain. (Wait, are we doing Sith? New Order? Final Order? Empire?

Plat would your pitch take place before the Clone Wars?

AwesomeUser23 wrote:

Okay, I’m gonna pitch a Sith villain. (Wait, are we doing Sith? New Order? Final Order? Empire?

Let's start this universe before the Skywalker Saga would take place in actual canon, although we can have books and series set way earlier. You can also pitch stuff for the future of the universe as long as it doesn't tie much into the main timeline that way spoilers for the future of the universe don't get revealed.

As a historian I'm gonna make some lore for some earlier parts of this timeline.
Edit: this post is reserved.

Codey9 wrote:

Plat would your pitch take place before the Clone Wars?

Anytime pre galactic civil war

Platypus_WKeyboard wrote:

Codey9 wrote:

Plat would your pitch take place before the Clone Wars?

Anytime pre galactic civil war

Okay. Once we figure out how our timeline works (how long years are, how long days are, ect) and our timeline abbreviations (BC, BCE, ect) I can add it into the timeline.

Codey9 wrote:

Platypus_WKeyboard wrote:

Codey9 wrote:

Plat would your pitch take place before the Clone Wars?

Anytime pre galactic civil war

Okay. Once we figure out how our timeline works (how long years are, how long days are, ect) and our timeline abbreviations (BC, BCE, ect) I can add it into the timeline.

Okay

I'm here

ganeshsai wrote:

I'm here

I'll add you to the crew member list

ganeshsai wrote:

I'm here

What do you want to do

Also any questions about Black Sparrow?

Platypus_WKeyboard wrote:

ganeshsai wrote:

I'm here

What do you want to do

Also any questions about Black Sparrow?

Is black sparrow the name?

ganeshsai wrote:

Platypus_WKeyboard wrote:

ganeshsai wrote:

I'm here

What do you want to do

Also any questions about Black Sparrow?

Is black sparrow the name?

Working title the pitch is one the first page

Platypus_WKeyboard wrote:

ganeshsai wrote:

Platypus_WKeyboard wrote:

ganeshsai wrote:

I'm here

What do you want to do

Also any questions about Black Sparrow?

Is black sparrow the name?

Working title the pitch is one the first page

Ok. I have 4 questions. Is this first person? also Do we have a studio? Do we have a account? Also do we get choose a charcter to write about?

ganeshsai wrote:

Platypus_WKeyboard wrote:

ganeshsai wrote:

Platypus_WKeyboard wrote:

ganeshsai wrote:

I'm here

What do you want to do

Also any questions about Black Sparrow?

Is black sparrow the name?

Working title the pitch is one the first page

Ok. I have 4 questions. Is this first person? also Do we have a studio? Do we have a account? Also do we get choose a charcter to write about?

1. You can write a book that's either third person or first person. Third person is going to be the most commonly used though.
2. I'll make a studio later.
3. I'll make an account later as well.
4. You don't choose a character, you just pitch something.

ganeshsai wrote:

Platypus_WKeyboard wrote:

ganeshsai wrote:

Platypus_WKeyboard wrote:

ganeshsai wrote:

I'm here

What do you want to do

Also any questions about Black Sparrow?

Is black sparrow the name?

Working title the pitch is one the first page

Ok. I have 4 questions. Is this first person? also Do we have a studio? Do we have a account? Also do we get choose a charcter to write about?

1. It'll be in third person
2. No
3. No
4. Yes you come up with a character(a)

What would be a good title?

Platypus_WKeyboard wrote:

What would be a good title?

For your pitch?

Platypus_WKeyboard wrote:

ganeshsai wrote:

Platypus_WKeyboard wrote:

ganeshsai wrote:

Platypus_WKeyboard wrote:

ganeshsai wrote:

I'm here

What do you want to do

Also any questions about Black Sparrow?

Is black sparrow the name?

Working title the pitch is one the first page

Ok. I have 4 questions. Is this first person? also Do we have a studio? Do we have a account? Also do we get choose a charcter to write about?

1. It'll be in third person
2. No
3. No
4. Yes you come up with a character(a)

Oh, so we get to create our own Star wars charcter right?

Codey9 wrote:

Platypus_WKeyboard wrote:

What would be a good title?

For your pitch?

Yeh

I'll do the Jedi kinda thing. Is that ok?

ganeshsai wrote:

I'll do the Jedi kinda thing. Is that ok?

Yeah make whoever you'd like.

Platypus_WKeyboard wrote:

Codey9 wrote:

Platypus_WKeyboard wrote:

What would be a good title?

For your pitch?

Yeh

Soooooo

Platypus_WKeyboard wrote:

Platypus_WKeyboard wrote:

Codey9 wrote:

Platypus_WKeyboard wrote:

What would be a good title?

For your pitch?

Yeh

Soooooo

Honestly Black Sparrow actually is pretty good. I guess you could also go with “The Sparrow Crew” or something. You could also just name it “Sparrow”. Without more plot details it's kinda hard to figure something out

Codey9 wrote:

ganeshsai wrote:

I'll do the Jedi kinda thing. Is that ok?

Yeah make whoever you'd like.

So the story will be mostly about a 2 people name Xizol Pylimin and a person name Anaytin who wants to be a Jedi but doesn't have the force in him.

ganeshsai wrote:

Codey9 wrote:

ganeshsai wrote:

I'll do the Jedi kinda thing. Is that ok?

Yeah make whoever you'd like.

So the story will be mostly about a 2 people name Xizol Pylimin and a person name Anaytin who wants to be a Jedi but doesn't have the force in him.

That's a cool concept

Xizol Pylimin : New Jedi, just got recruited.
Anaytin Blicon : Xizol's best friend, wants to be a Jedi and always tries to use the force but passes out and isn't sucessful. He ends up being a Fighter pilot for the Jedi/ Squadron.
Time : In the future, 300 years after Rey Skywalker d!ed.
Plot for the Jedi : After the Jedi pretty much just took down the Sith there were only 10 Jedi's left and 2 sith left. The Sith went into hiding and the Jedi has decided to start recruiting new Jedi's and Xizol just graduated from Jedi Academy.
10 Jedi alive : Guida Solo, Ancru Linse, Urai Sawk, TBA
2 Sith : Regko Lokor TBA

Codey9 wrote:

Platypus_WKeyboard wrote:

Platypus_WKeyboard wrote:

Codey9 wrote:

Platypus_WKeyboard wrote:

What would be a good title?

For your pitch?

Yeh

Soooooo

Honestly Black Sparrow actually is pretty good. I guess you could also go with “The Sparrow Crew” or something. You could also just name it “Sparrow”. Without more plot details it's kinda hard to figure something out

The title would be named after their ship but I haven't figured out a name and I need help

https://scratch.mit.edu/projects/807193797 New sign up. Should I accept?

Platypus_WKeyboard wrote:

Codey9 wrote:

Platypus_WKeyboard wrote:

Platypus_WKeyboard wrote:

Codey9 wrote:

Platypus_WKeyboard wrote:

What would be a good title?

For your pitch?

Yeh

Soooooo

Honestly Black Sparrow actually is pretty good. I guess you could also go with “The Sparrow Crew” or something. You could also just name it “Sparrow”. Without more plot details it's kinda hard to figure something out

The title would be named after their ship but I haven't figured out a name and I need help

Ohh okay. D'you think it should be named after something or do you want to give it a unique word as its name?

Codey9 wrote:

Platypus_WKeyboard wrote:

Codey9 wrote:

Platypus_WKeyboard wrote:

Platypus_WKeyboard wrote:

Codey9 wrote:

Platypus_WKeyboard wrote:

What would be a good title?

For your pitch?

Yeh

Soooooo

Honestly Black Sparrow actually is pretty good. I guess you could also go with “The Sparrow Crew” or something. You could also just name it “Sparrow”. Without more plot details it's kinda hard to figure something out

The title would be named after their ship but I haven't figured out a name and I need help

Ohh okay. D'you think it should be named after something or do you want to give it a unique word as its name?

Something unique

Codey9 wrote:

https://scratch.mit.edu/projects/807193797 New sign up. Should I accept?

You should

ganeshsai wrote:

Xizol Pylimin : New Jedi, just got recruited.
Anaytin Blicon : Xizol's best friend, wants to be a Jedi and always tries to use the force but passes out and isn't sucessful. He ends up being a Fighter pilot for the Jedi/ Squadron.
Time : In the future, 300 years after Rey Skywalker d!ed.
Plot for the Jedi : After the Jedi pretty much just took down the Sith there were only 10 Jedi's left and 2 sith left. The Sith went into hiding and the Jedi has decided to start recruiting new Jedi's and Xizol just graduated from Jedi Academy.
10 Jedi alive : Guida Solo, Ancru Linse, Urai Sawk, TBA
2 Sith : Regko Lokor TBA

What are you thoughts on this??

ganeshsai wrote:

ganeshsai wrote:

Xizol Pylimin : New Jedi, just got recruited.
Anaytin Blicon : Xizol's best friend, wants to be a Jedi and always tries to use the force but passes out and isn't sucessful. He ends up being a Fighter pilot for the Jedi/ Squadron.
Time : In the future, 300 years after Rey Skywalker d!ed.
Plot for the Jedi : After the Jedi pretty much just took down the Sith there were only 10 Jedi's left and 2 sith left. The Sith went into hiding and the Jedi has decided to start recruiting new Jedi's and Xizol just graduated from Jedi Academy.
10 Jedi alive : Guida Solo, Ancru Linse, Urai Sawk, TBA
2 Sith : Regko Lokor TBA

What are you thoughts on this??

It's good, but we'll need to be careful with it because as of now we're not sure what the story will be like that far in the future.

Codey9 wrote:

ganeshsai wrote:

ganeshsai wrote:

Xizol Pylimin : New Jedi, just got recruited.
Anaytin Blicon : Xizol's best friend, wants to be a Jedi and always tries to use the force but passes out and isn't sucessful. He ends up being a Fighter pilot for the Jedi/ Squadron.
Time : In the future, 300 years after Rey Skywalker d!ed.
Plot for the Jedi : After the Jedi pretty much just took down the Sith there were only 10 Jedi's left and 2 sith left. The Sith went into hiding and the Jedi has decided to start recruiting new Jedi's and Xizol just graduated from Jedi Academy.
10 Jedi alive : Guida Solo, Ancru Linse, Urai Sawk, TBA
2 Sith : Regko Lokor TBA

What are you thoughts on this??

It's good, but we'll need to be careful with it because as of now we're not sure what the story will be like that far in the future.

I have an idea where they time travel too

Codey, Can you make a studio?

ganeshsai wrote:

Codey9 wrote:

ganeshsai wrote:

ganeshsai wrote:

Xizol Pylimin : New Jedi, just got recruited.
Anaytin Blicon : Xizol's best friend, wants to be a Jedi and always tries to use the force but passes out and isn't sucessful. He ends up being a Fighter pilot for the Jedi/ Squadron.
Time : In the future, 300 years after Rey Skywalker d!ed.
Plot for the Jedi : After the Jedi pretty much just took down the Sith there were only 10 Jedi's left and 2 sith left. The Sith went into hiding and the Jedi has decided to start recruiting new Jedi's and Xizol just graduated from Jedi Academy.
10 Jedi alive : Guida Solo, Ancru Linse, Urai Sawk, TBA
2 Sith : Regko Lokor TBA

What are you thoughts on this??

It's good, but we'll need to be careful with it because as of now we're not sure what the story will be like that far in the future.

I have an idea where they time travel too

Mmmmmmmm please no

ganeshsai wrote:

Codey9 wrote:

ganeshsai wrote:

ganeshsai wrote:

Xizol Pylimin : New Jedi, just got recruited.
Anaytin Blicon : Xizol's best friend, wants to be a Jedi and always tries to use the force but passes out and isn't sucessful. He ends up being a Fighter pilot for the Jedi/ Squadron.
Time : In the future, 300 years after Rey Skywalker d!ed.
Plot for the Jedi : After the Jedi pretty much just took down the Sith there were only 10 Jedi's left and 2 sith left. The Sith went into hiding and the Jedi has decided to start recruiting new Jedi's and Xizol just graduated from Jedi Academy.
10 Jedi alive : Guida Solo, Ancru Linse, Urai Sawk, TBA
2 Sith : Regko Lokor TBA

What are you thoughts on this??

It's good, but we'll need to be careful with it because as of now we're not sure what the story will be like that far in the future.

I have an idea where they time travel too

Ehh probably no time traveling.

Platypus_WKeyboard wrote:

ganeshsai wrote:

Codey9 wrote:

ganeshsai wrote:

ganeshsai wrote:

Xizol Pylimin : New Jedi, just got recruited.
Anaytin Blicon : Xizol's best friend, wants to be a Jedi and always tries to use the force but passes out and isn't sucessful. He ends up being a Fighter pilot for the Jedi/ Squadron.
Time : In the future, 300 years after Rey Skywalker d!ed.
Plot for the Jedi : After the Jedi pretty much just took down the Sith there were only 10 Jedi's left and 2 sith left. The Sith went into hiding and the Jedi has decided to start recruiting new Jedi's and Xizol just graduated from Jedi Academy.
10 Jedi alive : Guida Solo, Ancru Linse, Urai Sawk, TBA
2 Sith : Regko Lokor TBA

What are you thoughts on this??

It's good, but we'll need to be careful with it because as of now we're not sure what the story will be like that far in the future.

I have an idea where they time travel too

Mmmmmmmm please no

Ok, I'll change the time to 10 years after Rey Skywalker d!ed.