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Hello hello.

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boom2ratz wrote:
Hello hello.

Hello Hello Hello

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Platypus_WKeyboard wrote:
boom2ratz wrote:
Hello hello.
Hello Hello Hello

Okay, so. Any help needed for CDM?

Have you decided if you're using Zatanna?

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BONJOUR. JE M'APPELLE POMME DE TERRE.

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boom2ratz wrote:
Platypus_WKeyboard wrote:
boom2ratz wrote:
Hello hello.
Hello Hello Hello
Okay, so. Any help needed for CDM?

Have you decided if you're using Zatanna?

Yes, story I'm stuck on a lot, and yes but changing the character slightly (aging her down closer to the titans)

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Platypus_WKeyboard wrote:
boom2ratz wrote:
Platypus_WKeyboard wrote:
boom2ratz wrote:
Hello hello.
Hello Hello Hello
Okay, so. Any help needed for CDM?

Have you decided if you're using Zatanna?
Yes, story I'm stuck on a lot, and yes but changing the character slightly (aging her down closer to the titans)

Okay. What have you got as a basic outline for the story?

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boom2ratz wrote:
Platypus_WKeyboard wrote:
boom2ratz wrote:
Platypus_WKeyboard wrote:
boom2ratz wrote:
Hello hello.
Hello Hello Hello
Okay, so. Any help needed for CDM?

Have you decided if you're using Zatanna?
Yes, story I'm stuck on a lot, and yes but changing the character slightly (aging her down closer to the titans)
Okay. What have you got as a basic outline for the story?

An essay outline not a story outline

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HexagonWorld wrote:
BONJOUR. JE M'APPELLE POMME DE TERRE.

POURQUOI DAVE.

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Platypus_WKeyboard wrote:
boom2ratz wrote:
Platypus_WKeyboard wrote:
boom2ratz wrote:
Platypus_WKeyboard wrote:
boom2ratz wrote:
Hello hello.
Hello Hello Hello
Okay, so. Any help needed for CDM?

Have you decided if you're using Zatanna?
Yes, story I'm stuck on a lot, and yes but changing the character slightly (aging her down closer to the titans)
Okay. What have you got as a basic outline for the story?
An essay outline not a story outline

Okay, can you show it?

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Constantine and the Dark Multiverse OutLine
Prologue
John as a child
Act One
Zatanna being attacked by robin hyenas
John and Zatanna get attacked by the Time Master
IDK
IDK
IDK
Act Two
IDK
IDK
They get caught by the Time Master
John meets the JSA
The JSA tells john about how he caused a crisis and other things
The Batman Who Laughs attacks killing the JSA and kidnapping Zatanna
John escapes to universe -2 and gets into a battle with Ghoul Constantine and dies
Act Three
John arrives to the afterlife and meets Lucifer
John makes a deal to be alive
Battle Starts by Master of Puppets by Mettalica
IDK
IDK
IDK

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Platypus_WKeyboard wrote:
Constantine and the Dark Multiverse OutLine
Prologue
John as a child
Act One
Zatanna being attacked by robin hyenas
John and Zatanna get attacked by the Time Master
IDK
IDK
IDK
Act Two
IDK
IDK
They get caught by the Time Master
John meets the JSA
The JSA tells john about how he caused a crisis and other things
The Batman Who Laughs attacks killing the JSA and kidnapping Zatanna
John escapes to universe -2 and gets into a battle with Ghoul Constantine and dies
Act Three
John arrives to the afterlife and meets Lucifer
John makes a deal to be alive
Battle Starts by Master of Puppets by Mettalica
IDK
IDK
IDK

This is… Just Multiverse of Madness. Down to the zombie protagonist and exposition about the big event happening in the climax of the universe.

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Platypus_WKeyboard wrote:
Constantine and the Dark Multiverse OutLine
Prologue
John as a child
Act One
Zatanna being attacked by robin hyenas
John and Zatanna get attacked by the Time Master
IDK
IDK
IDK
Act Two
IDK
IDK
They get caught by the Time Master
John meets the JSA
The JSA tells john about how he caused a crisis and other things
The Batman Who Laughs attacks killing the JSA and kidnapping Zatanna
John escapes to universe -2 and gets into a battle with Ghoul Constantine and dies
Act Three
John arrives to the afterlife and meets Lucifer
John makes a deal to be alive
Battle Starts by Master of Puppets by Mettalica
IDK
IDK
IDK

This is weird in a great way. I'll write my ideas soon, hold on.

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HexagonWorld wrote:
Platypus_WKeyboard wrote:
Constantine and the Dark Multiverse OutLine
Prologue
John as a child
Act One
Zatanna being attacked by robin hyenas
John and Zatanna get attacked by the Time Master
IDK
IDK
IDK
Act Two
IDK
IDK
They get caught by the Time Master
John meets the JSA
The JSA tells john about how he caused a crisis and other things
The Batman Who Laughs attacks killing the JSA and kidnapping Zatanna
John escapes to universe -2 and gets into a battle with Ghoul Constantine and dies
Act Three
John arrives to the afterlife and meets Lucifer
John makes a deal to be alive
Battle Starts by Master of Puppets by Mettalica
IDK
IDK
IDK
This is… Just Multiverse of Madness. Down to the zombie protagonist.

There are differences trust me

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Wait we have a problem with Gods in the PDCU

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Platypus_WKeyboard wrote:
Wait we have a problem with Gods in the PDCU

What?

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Constantine and the Dark Multiverse OutLine
Prologue
John as a child - This is original, but only because MOM didn't have a prologue
Act One
Zatanna being attacked by robin hyenas = America is attacked by the weird monster thing
John and Zatanna get attacked by the Time Master = America and Strange are attacked by Wanda
IDK
IDK
IDK
Act Two
IDK
IDK
They get caught by the Time Master = They get caught by Mordo
John meets the JSA = Strange meets the Illuminati
The JSA tells john about how he caused a crisis and other things = The Illuminati tells Strange about how he caused an incursion and other things.
The Batman Who Laughs attacks killing the JSA and kidnapping Zatanna = Wanda attacks, killing the Illuminati and kidnapping America.
John escapes to universe -2 and gets into a battle with Ghoul Constantine and dies = Strange escapes to that other universe and gets into a battle with Sinister Strange
Act Three
John arrives to the afterlife and meets Lucifer = Strange gets the Darkhold.
John makes a deal to be alive = Strange Dreamwalks into his own corpse, becoming a zombie.
Battle Starts by Master of Puppets by Mettalica
IDK
IDK
IDK

There is ONE plot beat that I couldn't match, and that was because MOM didn't have a prologue.

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I can see your stunned faces, too shocked to respond.

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HexagonWorld wrote:
I can see your stunned faces, too shocked to respond.

Too lazy to respond. Look, if we shift it up enough, it can be different.

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boom2ratz wrote:
HexagonWorld wrote:
I can see your stunned faces, too shocked to respond.
Too lazy to respond. Look, if we shift it up enough, it can be different.

Wait, didn't Plat say he hadn't seen MOM when he came up with this?

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HexagonWorld wrote:
boom2ratz wrote:
HexagonWorld wrote:
I can see your stunned faces, too shocked to respond.
Too lazy to respond. Look, if we shift it up enough, it can be different.
Wait, didn't Plat say he hadn't seen MOM when he came up with this?

Maybe not all of this. The JSA scene was written before he saw it.

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boom2ratz wrote:
HexagonWorld wrote:
boom2ratz wrote:
HexagonWorld wrote:
I can see your stunned faces, too shocked to respond.
Too lazy to respond. Look, if we shift it up enough, it can be different.
Wait, didn't Plat say he hadn't seen MOM when he came up with this?
Maybe not all of this. The JSA scene was written before he saw it.

Didn't you suggest the JSA scene?

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HexagonWorld wrote:
boom2ratz wrote:
HexagonWorld wrote:
I can see your stunned faces, too shocked to respond.
Too lazy to respond. Look, if we shift it up enough, it can be different.
Wait, didn't Plat say he hadn't seen MOM when he came up with this?

Yes?

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HexagonWorld wrote:
boom2ratz wrote:
HexagonWorld wrote:
boom2ratz wrote:
HexagonWorld wrote:
I can see your stunned faces, too shocked to respond.
Too lazy to respond. Look, if we shift it up enough, it can be different.
Wait, didn't Plat say he hadn't seen MOM when he came up with this?
Maybe not all of this. The JSA scene was written before he saw it.
Didn't you suggest the JSA scene?

No. I asked if we were having the JSA in the PDCU somehow.

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boom2ratz wrote:
An Earth Two (Golden Age) universe, with Golden Age Batman, Jay Garrett Flash, Alan Scott, etc., they form the JSA who judge (whoever goes into this universe)

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Platypus_WKeyboard wrote:
boom2ratz wrote:
An Earth Two (Golden Age) universe, with Golden Age Batman, Jay Garrett Flash, Alan Scott, etc., they form the JSA who judge (whoever goes into this universe)

That was later. I think.

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boom2ratz wrote:
Platypus_WKeyboard wrote:
boom2ratz wrote:
An Earth Two (Golden Age) universe, with Golden Age Batman, Jay Garrett Flash, Alan Scott, etc., they form the JSA who judge (whoever goes into this universe)
That was later. I think.

Nope, not to long after I started it

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Platypus_WKeyboard wrote:
boom2ratz wrote:
Platypus_WKeyboard wrote:
boom2ratz wrote:
An Earth Two (Golden Age) universe, with Golden Age Batman, Jay Garrett Flash, Alan Scott, etc., they form the JSA who judge (whoever goes into this universe)
That was later. I think.
Nope, not to long after I started it

Huh.

Welp. I dare say you're not taking the JSA out.

But, Plat, if we put more stuff in, it'll be different enough.

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boom2ratz wrote:
Platypus_WKeyboard wrote:
boom2ratz wrote:
Platypus_WKeyboard wrote:
boom2ratz wrote:
An Earth Two (Golden Age) universe, with Golden Age Batman, Jay Garrett Flash, Alan Scott, etc., they form the JSA who judge (whoever goes into this universe)
That was later. I think.
Nope, not to long after I started it
Huh.

Welp. I dare say you're not taking the JSA out.

But, Plat, if we put more stuff in, it'll be different enough.

So what are your ideas

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Platypus_WKeyboard wrote:
boom2ratz wrote:
Platypus_WKeyboard wrote:
boom2ratz wrote:
Platypus_WKeyboard wrote:
boom2ratz wrote:
An Earth Two (Golden Age) universe, with Golden Age Batman, Jay Garrett Flash, Alan Scott, etc., they form the JSA who judge (whoever goes into this universe)
That was later. I think.
Nope, not to long after I started it
Huh.

Welp. I dare say you're not taking the JSA out.

But, Plat, if we put more stuff in, it'll be different enough.
So what are your ideas

How do we explain different gods

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What are the ideas?

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Platypus_WKeyboard wrote:
What are the ideas?

I'll write them tomorrow after school, I'mma go to bed soon.

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boom2ratz wrote:
Platypus_WKeyboard wrote:
What are the ideas?
I'll write them tomorrow after school, I'mma go to bed soon.

Ok

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Also there isn't much Dark Multiverse, just like how MOM didn't have too much madness.

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HexagonWorld wrote:
Also there isn't much Dark Multiverse, just like how MOM didn't have too much madness.

Its just the main thing in the movie, also Boom your ideas?

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boom2ratz wrote:
Platypus_WKeyboard wrote:
What are the ideas?
I'll write them tomorrow after school, I'mma go to bed soon.

2 Days Later

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HexagonWorld wrote:
boom2ratz wrote:
Platypus_WKeyboard wrote:
What are the ideas?
I'll write them tomorrow after school, I'mma go to bed soon.
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Lol, but also boom when!?

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this is now musical

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Platypus_WKeyboard wrote:
this is now musical

YES!

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HexagonWorld wrote:
boom2ratz wrote:
Platypus_WKeyboard wrote:
What are the ideas?
I'll write them tomorrow after school, I'mma go to bed soon.
2 Days Later

2 Days Later

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HexagonWorld wrote:
HexagonWorld wrote:
boom2ratz wrote:
Platypus_WKeyboard wrote:
What are the ideas?
I'll write them tomorrow after school, I'mma go to bed soon.
2 Days Later
2 Days Later

and a couple minutes later

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Platypus_WKeyboard wrote:
HexagonWorld wrote:
HexagonWorld wrote:
boom2ratz wrote:
Platypus_WKeyboard wrote:
What are the ideas?
I'll write them tomorrow after school, I'mma go to bed soon.
2 Days Later
2 Days Later
and a couple minutes later

Boom. It's been 4 days.

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HexagonWorld wrote:
Platypus_WKeyboard wrote:
HexagonWorld wrote:
HexagonWorld wrote:
boom2ratz wrote:
Platypus_WKeyboard wrote:
What are the ideas?
I'll write them tomorrow after school, I'mma go to bed soon.
2 Days Later
2 Days Later
and a couple minutes later
Boom. It's been 4 days.

Aight aight aight.

For two days I was lazy, the other two I was stayin' at a friends (I watched the amazing DC LEAGUE OF SUPERPETS!). I'll do it soon.

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boom2ratz wrote:
HexagonWorld wrote:
Platypus_WKeyboard wrote:
HexagonWorld wrote:
HexagonWorld wrote:
boom2ratz wrote:
Platypus_WKeyboard wrote:
What are the ideas?
I'll write them tomorrow after school, I'mma go to bed soon.
2 Days Later
2 Days Later
and a couple minutes later
Boom. It's been 4 days.
Aight aight aight.

For two days I was lazy, the other two I was stayin' at a friends (I watched the amazing DC LEAGUE OF SUPERPETS!). I'll do it soon.

Was it good

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boom2ratz wrote:
HexagonWorld wrote:
Platypus_WKeyboard wrote:
HexagonWorld wrote:
HexagonWorld wrote:
boom2ratz wrote:
Platypus_WKeyboard wrote:
What are the ideas?
I'll write them tomorrow after school, I'mma go to bed soon.
2 Days Later
2 Days Later
and a couple minutes later
Boom. It's been 4 days.
Aight aight aight.

For two days I was lazy, the other two I was stayin' at a friends (I watched the amazing DC LEAGUE OF SUPERPETS!). I'll do it soon.

Is it really that good? WONDER WOMAN HAS A KANGAROO NOT A PIG

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Platypus_WKeyboard wrote:
boom2ratz wrote:
HexagonWorld wrote:
Platypus_WKeyboard wrote:
HexagonWorld wrote:
HexagonWorld wrote:
boom2ratz wrote:
Platypus_WKeyboard wrote:
What are the ideas?
I'll write them tomorrow after school, I'mma go to bed soon.
2 Days Later
2 Days Later
and a couple minutes later
Boom. It's been 4 days.
Aight aight aight.

For two days I was lazy, the other two I was stayin' at a friends (I watched the amazing DC LEAGUE OF SUPERPETS!). I'll do it soon.
Was it good

It was great, but I wish they had given Aquaman and Cyborg actual pets. They just got some magic redeemed guinea pigs at the end. I think Aquaman should've gotten a goldfish (throughout the movie his bowl would be strapped to the turtle's back), and Cyborg, a rabbit. Also, Bane should've been in the movie, and he should've had a CANARY!

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boom2ratz wrote:
Platypus_WKeyboard wrote:
boom2ratz wrote:
HexagonWorld wrote:
Platypus_WKeyboard wrote:
HexagonWorld wrote:
HexagonWorld wrote:
boom2ratz wrote:
Platypus_WKeyboard wrote:
What are the ideas?
I'll write them tomorrow after school, I'mma go to bed soon.
2 Days Later
2 Days Later
and a couple minutes later
Boom. It's been 4 days.
Aight aight aight.

For two days I was lazy, the other two I was stayin' at a friends (I watched the amazing DC LEAGUE OF SUPERPETS!). I'll do it soon.
Was it good
It was great, but I wish they had given Aquaman and Cyborg actual pets. They just got some magic redeemed guinea pigs at the end. I think Aquaman should've gotten a goldfish (throughout the movie his bowl would be strapped to the turtle's back), and Cyborg, a rabbit. Also, Bane should've been in the movie, and he should've had a CANARY!

I've seen the JL designs for the movie and what is going on with Cyborg's haircut?

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HexagonWorld wrote:
boom2ratz wrote:
Platypus_WKeyboard wrote:
boom2ratz wrote:
HexagonWorld wrote:
Platypus_WKeyboard wrote:
HexagonWorld wrote:
HexagonWorld wrote:
boom2ratz wrote:
Platypus_WKeyboard wrote:
What are the ideas?
I'll write them tomorrow after school, I'mma go to bed soon.
2 Days Later
2 Days Later
and a couple minutes later
Boom. It's been 4 days.
Aight aight aight.

For two days I was lazy, the other two I was stayin' at a friends (I watched the amazing DC LEAGUE OF SUPERPETS!). I'll do it soon.
Was it good
It was great, but I wish they had given Aquaman and Cyborg actual pets. They just got some magic redeemed guinea pigs at the end. I think Aquaman should've gotten a goldfish (throughout the movie his bowl would be strapped to the turtle's back), and Cyborg, a rabbit. Also, Bane should've been in the movie, and he should've had a CANARY!
I've seen the JL designs for the movie and what is going on with Cyborg's haircut?

Flash skipped leg day

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HexagonWorld wrote:
HexagonWorld wrote:
boom2ratz wrote:
Platypus_WKeyboard wrote:
What are the ideas?
I'll write them tomorrow after school, I'mma go to bed soon.
2 Days Later
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